Reviews for AddictBy : BigE2955 |
Try out a more realistic take with increased sensuality during the act.
I came.
great chapter, i love it when tsunade got jealous. i hope we get to see femsasuke soon
naruto x ino
This was a great chapter. I really like how you’re portraying Naruto’s sexual prowess, and how maybe it isn’t a good thing that you can fuck any woman into submission. I also liked the Temari part at the beginning. I’m not a fan of the cuck/cheating/humiliation fics myself, whether they’re Naruto or Sasuke. Update soon!
The Legendary Sucker Strikes Again!
narutoxtsunade is actually one of my favorite pairing, doesn't matter if it's a time travel fic or a regular one. naruto has to be at least 16 though
Goddamn. It’s not like it hasn’t been done before, but Tsunade smut in the Hokage Office always gets me. I like how you didn’t stretch out the whole Sakura thing, but didn’t dismiss it either. Can’t wait for the next chapter
Best story, more to come I hope?
great chapter man, i hope that we get to see Satsuki soon
Great chapter. It took a bit too long but eh. what can you do, eh? there is one other thing that I didn't like about this chapter though;
Honestly, people doing what Sakura just did in this chapter annoy me more than pretty much anything else. If something annoyed me more than this, it would probably go into disgusted territory.
Like, he basically told you he has some stuff to do, you understood that he doesn't want you there and then left. And then you just break into his house to see what he is hiding from you? Like, its none of your business bitch, just fuck off... It's not like he invited you to his house and then told you to leave anyway. You came on your own. And then after all that, she still acts like she is the victim... The worst part is, this is exactly what a real WOMEN would act like if the same shit happened... God, women are waaay more trouble than they are worth honestly...
your scenes are solidly written. and I'm digging the attempt at storyline.
look forward to the next ch. and ad a hinata fanboy can't wait
for her intro. keep rocking!
Have you read 'Stop Teasing Us Sensei' by lordoflust ? Its quiet arousing.
I liked it. Obviously we all know what comes next though. I hope that there are some people who aren’t broken by him though. Sakura I honestly don’t really care, but a sweeter lemon with Satsuki would be nice. Also Kushina if you plan on having her, though I feel like there’s so much Kushina already
Awesome chapter
cant wait for more
please comtinue
dayum poor naruto
he can’t catch a break
hope the story is Updated sooner
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