Reviews for Sasuke-senseiBy : BigE2955 |
Interesting story look forward to more
Once again, my senpai proves that he's a top-tier smut writer!
First and foremost, I have to mention how cute Naruko is. You write her so well. She's such a dork! I love it.
Now, as for Naruko's cousin... I love Karin so much! She's so sexy without really trying, and her willingness to use her body for personal gain, and even going as far as blackmailing her sensei, makes her a really interesting character. She's certainly a fiesty little redhead!
This is my first high school story, and it's great! Good job, senpai!
<3
Knocked it out the park ! Great stuff keep it up !
This is really great. One suggestion though ...have the desk changed so that nothing can be seen below Sasukes midsection. any one of his students like Karin for example could arrive early and attend to the hard problem beneth the desk without being seen by the other students . I mean Sasuke could teach a class without leaving the desk.
great opening chapter
I like it. Very well written. Good character development ,I like that Karin seduced Sasuke and did not turn into a cock starved slut like usual. It has a more real take on the situation. Sasukes reaction and fear of the situation was spot on. He will not be able to say no to them all lol ,they are too damn cute and hot. Karin already has him trapped lol.
This is awesome! Loved seeing this in AU, something about student/teacher fics are always especially hot. Great to see Karin get some love, haven't seen her on any fics lately. So this is going to have more? Can't wait!
It's a good thing I had a fan on me the entire time I read this first chapter, because it made me a little hot. I loved the little details you threw into it- With Tsunade being the principle, Ino and Sakura's friendship/rivalry that's so on point, etc. I liked that you made Karin the girl this starts with, because I don't see much of her in stories like this, and your depiction of her, while still sassy and naughty, was kind of lovable.
I really liked how you wrote Sasuke into the story, I think it's interesting to read him as a teacher in the first place, and you did him justice. I don't think anyone writes lemons quite like you, I think you are a master at your craft and this story is an instant favorite of mine. Thank you for the good read <3
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