Lol, I’m still waiting on the update.

So two chapters in and Sasuke is starting to get into things, though with a bit of trepidation. I'm really curious to see who will make the first move in the next chapter.

Ah the plot thickens! 

Great chapter. I’m enjoying Sasuke’s descent into sexual depravity. The way he’s beginning to see more of the girls as potential partners now that he’s broken the rules once (or a few times ;)  ) with Karin.

I really appreciate your depiction of Anko. I’ve known a few RL teachers with that attitude. The things that can happen in the teachers lounge... wondering if you’ll take her and Sasuke there at some point? Or does he find her too forward? 

In any case, there are many possibilities going forward and I’m eager to see what happens next.

Mehh. I love to read smut but you have a habit of dragging and it can be boring. I find myself scrolling over some parts. First part was good and a lot different from you're other stories. Sasuke was not in control and Karin was in charge. Maybe that made the difference. All your stories always have Sasuke in control which is getting boring. I would love to see the teacher(sasu) being tied down and at the mercy of his students or Anko. This might open up to more interesting situations. Playing the submissive role does not mean that Sasuke has to be humiliated, it can just mean the female is a bit more bolder and rougher and gets what she wants and Sasuke would be a bit reluctant for obvious reasons i.e. he is a teacher and shouldn't be doing these things. And in this case it might work well. Sometimes change is good and it would do you some good. Your stories are getting vanilla no offence. 

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Love it! xD

why you no respond to us ...

I felt that chapter one was far better. It was refreshing that Karin had control and Sasuke was uncertaiuncertaine but gave into lust. Chapter two had a boring cheesy porno feel it kinda let me down. the chapter was long which is always better but it lacked some proper erotic action and dialogue . Maybe next one will be better ?

This was ok but I would say chapter 1 is a lot better. And Sasuke is contradicting himself. One minute Sasuke tells Naruto he does not want Karin around and the next he is fucking Karin. But hey i should not expect much plot from a harem story. Apart from Sasuke being slightly out of character there is at least no grammar errors. Mediocre i would say. Do work on a Naruto story. Good luck. 

Great chapter

really a good story so far - please update asap

Now, where do we start this summarized lecture of text? 

The characters used in this story were interesting by themselves, yet still felt like they belonged in the Naruto universe. Their personalities were similar, if not nearly identical, to their original concepts and this was further highlighted by particular antics that appeared when they were expected the least.

Moving onto a more spicy topic, using a highly concentrated aphrodisiac of some kind was an interesting twist, and with Karin's personality and knowledge, a scenario was created wherein the two of them were left alone with no possible witnesses nearby.

Their sexual encounters, however short, gave me quite a vivid idea as to what was happening. Although, the story did feel a little drawn out by the end; almost bringing with it the urge to skip past certain points.

Your descriptions of the characters are alright, though they almost demand that the reader is familiar with the characters before starting. Adding in a generalized description of the "main" characters involved might be worth looking into in the future. Although. let it be said that every background character does not need a description.

One extra detail that served as the icing on the cake was Sasuke's interaction with Kakashi, an older teacher with more experience and almost a frightening ability to make jokes about reality without knowing so himself. Unless that were to work as a reference to the way he spied on the original Team 7 before their meeting. 

Overall, this is very well written, with no noteworthy grammatical flaws, and you show a clear understanding of how to make a character seem like a living being. I'm greatly anticipating the following chapters, if only just to see who leads the new academical revolution. 

Really super cool new fic ,gona keep a close eye on it. Lust love and friendship next please ,its my fav.

Oh my! It seems as if Sasuke-sensei is in way over his head. 

I like the way you portray his conflicting emotions. It adds a lot to the story. 

Can’t wait to see what happens next and who else wants “extra credit”. Will Sasuke get caught? So many possibilities...