Reviews for The ProposalBy : LoneReader3173 |
Is it just me or does anyone else keep picturing Naruto as a kind of 'Star-Lord Chris Pratt' type of character?!? (who I totally love btw)
A couple typo's in the beginning- like... (Sasuke's hair stinking instead of sticking up) in paragraph 3. Nothing that really detracts from the story.
This is really good!!! Your story has substance to it and so does not have that PWP feel to it that I really try to avoid. Sexy Naruto and desperate and hesitant Sasuke are a good combination :)
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