Reviews for Short, Smutty StoriesBy : BigE2955 |
This story series is just another way for the author to flex their wanking love for Sasuke and his uncharacteristic dominance that is not canon to the real Sasuke that is portrayed in the anime and manga.
All these scenarios that involve Sasuke is just scenarios that the author wants Sasuke to have sex with them in real life if Sasuke became real. LOL
It's a good thing this compilation story is probably dead since you ran out of ideas on how to wrongfully use tags and excute them in stories!
It also doesn't help you need money to inspire you to write a story!
Don't forget the people who gave you ideas on that are still waiting for those one-shot stories on hentaifoundry, idiot!
I want to see a voyeur story of Naruto fucking Sakura with Sasuke coming to terms of being more turned on at the site than when he as having sex with Sakura!
You have very dumb logic if this is cuckholding! lol
Unless Kiba managed to fuck his mother and sister then I would say it is, but it isn't and this is just a person coming to accept they're a voyeur and very submissive!
Like come on! This is very simple logic that I'm surprised you haven't read other voyeur stories on Literotica to realize that.
Again, how does this make Kiba a cuckhold???
It only shows how he is a voyeur that got turned into someone who likes licking a male’s cum from Tsume/Hana’s pussy.
It’s not like Kiba was fucking Tsume or Hana before Sasuke started fucking them, right?
If not, then you should just accept Kiba didn’t become a cuckhold in the end of this 3 chapter story.
- Christian Watson (Leondin96 on DeviantArt and Gundam-Knight-Chris on Fanfiction)
Well, pleased to see Kiba accepting his new role in the household. Not like he was the man of the house to begin with, now was he?
As usual your characterization of Sasuke is on point; he's the smug asshole he always was but somehow incredibly fun to watch. You get the visceral feel of the scenes down in a way very few authors do and I love it.
I eagerly await more!
Nice ending. I am curious what else was on that video Kiba paused. I suppose I’ll just have to use my imagination 😉
Oof.
I really like the pacing in this one! It's very short and to the point, which I, as a person who can't spend a whole lot of time reading super long chapters, enjoyed very much.
I'm a huge fan of filming hentai, so the fact that there was a lot of that in this short three-shot was amazing. And anything Netorare is good in my book.
I love how Tsume is so rough with Kiba. She isn't a gentle, caring mother, but a stern woman who sorta bosses her son around, and you've captured that aspect of her character perfectly. And the mother/daughter interaction is spectacular. That they play fight over who is the better whore is amazing.
As for this chapter alone, I really liked the way Tsume described her first night's sleep after being creampied by Sasuke. That was very hot.
Thank you so much for being brave enough to write NTR/Cuck stories, senpai!
<3
awesome - you should write more cuckhold stories
Nice . update more often please !
Since this was the end of your three part with Kiba, do you think you can do one of these next ones? I hope you think about my last review, because I still want that one, but I now have another one.
Naruto x Hinata BDSM
Hinata is usually a shy, quiet, and submissive girl. However, when she is in the hot springs and she catches Naruto peeping on her, she shows him that she is actually the opposite of herself. She catches Naruto and knocks him out.
The next thing Naruto knows, he wakes up with his hands and feet bound by rope in only his underwear within a room fit for a BDSM loving dominatrix. That's when Hinata appears before him in latex corset, gloves, thong, and boots.
She explains that she isn't happy with him for peeping on her, but she has always wanted him. Unfortunately for him, she's going to punish him for peeping on her and show him that she's the dom in their new relationship while he's her bitch.
BDSM, small penis humiliation, cock and ball torture, chastity device, strap-on pegging and anything else you want to add. You could try to get in touch with me if you want.
Cuckold: a man whose wife is unfaithful
I have an idea you could do!
How about Sasuke walls in on Naruto and Mikoto fucking with Sasuke being impressed at how Naruto has more stamina (and a bigger dick lol) than he does?
It’s a little like voyeur, but Sasuke doesn’t have any hard (I.e. anger/hate) feelings and doesn’t feel humiliated until he starts jacking off to the scene.
- Christian Watson
BigE2955’s a bitch
I like but want read some more of the lustv and friendship my friend
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