Reviews for Naruto's AdventureBy : BigE2955 |
Hahahaha. That was great. I'm excited to see what you do next.
I'll be the first to admit I don't like your stories. Any of your stories, not just the Sasuke ones. I'll also admit to ignoring them outright as since I don't like them, there's no reason for me to waste my time reading then leaving some petty review, I decided to give this a try because it reminded me of another NarutoxSamuixKurosutchi story I read a while back and it was...okay, not bad but not great. You have a decent writing structure but you follow the same plight many on here follow and that's that the MC follows the same stigma. For instance, the MC has a huge penis, he's a playboy, and the women instantly fall over themselves, admittedly this one has an ulterior motive, there's no build up, no suspense. I'll continue to read this story but I hope you take this as constructive criticism and not a flame.
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