Reviews for Lust, Love, and FriendshipBy : BigE2955 |
Oh man start on the next one right now !
its almost blasphemous when hina says a dirty word lol I wana know so bad what is goin on in her head to see her hubby masturbating and watching
Am I the only one that noticed how Hinata came twice and it was not by her husbands doing ...so kinky in love !
This was very good. Not a wasted moment. The conversations kept my attention and were meaningful in regards to the situation. The pace was good. Could have given Hinata more POV to make her feelings and thoughts known. Sakura was brilliant. Her charcacter has so much to offer in regards to future developments. Don't overlook her. Now the ending left a craving for more and a subtle promise. Will we see how they deal with the aftermath in the next installment ?
Very good job on this one.
Nice chapter. I like the way you portray Sasuke’s guilt. The interplay of all the relationships is complicated and you bring it out well while still keeping the smut flowing.
Okay wow, that was stunningly written. I like how you focused more on how everyone involved is just having fun. Nobody's being bashed, nobody's miserable, everything is safe, sane and consensual. And best of all, it's all of those things without being boring.
Great job.
Hinata sure is taking it well 'pun intended' Great work on this keep it up 'pun intended'
I like how personal and emotional this was.
excellent. This is the best !
As always, great chapter,! Maybe a little more POV Hinata on why she accepts this arrangement (the pleasure she's having with Sasuke), I'm looking forward to seeing how Sasuke will react now that he knows that Naruto really enjoys seeing his wife get done fuck in front of him
When is the next chapter coming?
is sakura going to Invent the futanari jutsu and take naru chans anal virginity while sasuke makes love to his wife ? or maybe an anal vibrator for naru . sakura could lock him in chastity all week till its time for sasuke to fuck hinata
maybe a guy like sasuke bullied pidgeon guy and cucked him . probaby why he is so worked up over your fic and still reads it lol . anyhoot keep updating pal !! look forward to chap 5
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