Reviews for Naruko's RiseBy : Whoremione |
I feel so bad for Naruko I just want to hug her and keep her safe from all the asshats. Other than that good story so far interesting idea on the not remembering bit. Normally gamer Naruto plots have him remember and it was his first run going into second with tons of OP versions of himself unlocked. The other one I see is the wake up with a HUD idea.
Please get to the next chapter soon so Naruko is less bullied by people unless that happens in the next chapter to in which case take your time. My heart can't take her suffering.
I do like this story.
Still, stories like this often drift into 'Naruko is a slut and will now whore around the village forever'. I fear that.
I do want more of 'Naruko goes on missions and whores around other villages' :)
Good chapter bro
Epic hope you continue to update this and I'm really excited to see where you go with it.
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