Reviews for LOVE AND LUSTBy : DRAGONSAGE |
Really great man
Plz update
bro a good story but that cliffhanger was really painful.
please update.
updte please
I liked it a lot, and I want to read another chapter, when will another chapter be released? I need to find out what happens next, will Kushina have affairs with other characters?
please update soon
Wow. That was hot. That cliffhanger was a bummer tho haha. I hope Kushina gets with other man other than Kiba. Preferably an OC character lol
This is amazing. I love Kiba-Kushina, cheating fanfics. If I were to give any advice, I'd just say to be careful of some gramar and punctuation errors; also, be careful not to feel the need to be too specific in some cases (e.g 'over Kiba's right nipple'- over his nipple might have run a bit smoother), it can make the wording seem a little awkward at times. By all means, I dont mean to bash your work. It's just some casual advice I'll throw out there in case you find it helpful :)
Overall, I'm in love with this story. The cliffhanger has left me feeling really impatient haha. Please keep up the hard work! I can't wait to read the rest!
grea,t even if you left it in the best part that cruel :´(
continue like this my friend.
Can you do a scene where while Kiba and Kushina are fucking in her marital bed, Naruto and Tsume are in a love hotel? It's like how an H-manga ended, with two friends who didn't know were banging each other's moms.
Let's go make kiba fuck her soo bad she fohgets about her husband and son
HO - LY SHIT, man i need more of this ASAP, really, really good, you are evil dude, with that cliff hanger, i can be patient, for a while lol, i hope you update soon
Wow. I hope you update this story. I always love Kushina gets banged by other that Minato and Naruto
I like this story continues my friend
I love it, I need more, keep it up!
Good plot! I really like the idea of seeing Kushina cheated Minato with a friend of his son, really exciting. I'm waiting for the next chapter with a lot of impatience
Honestly, it is a good first chapter to set things up. I like the story but I wish it is divided up better to know when conversation points start and end.
Are you going to introduce Kushina and Kiba in the next chapter? I hope you do because it is a rare pairing and I'm eager to see it happen.
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