Reviews for Ghost-kunBy : BigE2955 |
So I took a look at your profile. You clearly state that you write a "vast variety of fanfiction". I'm not seeing that to be perfectly honest. You seem to recycle the same ideas for the most part, over and over again. They almost always involve Sasuke cucking someone or having a "massive" harem. And I'm not sure if you are aware of what the NTR genre truly entails.
I won't even touch your proverbial fixation on Sasuke. Out of the eighteen Naruto fanfics you've written, almost all of them are either Sasuke-centric or he's a main character. You're by far the biggest fan of him that I've come across in fanfiction. To each their own, though I don't quite see the appeal in his character.
Maybe its just admiration, or a crush (not an unheard of concept), or who knows what. Perhaps you should practice writing more of that vaunted "variety" of fanfiction, and maybe take a step out of your comfort zone and try writing about other characters and/or other genres. It might even help your writing ability. If you can get past your love for Sasuke Uchiha of course.
Or don't. It's your life.
you have no idea how to write a ntr story ntr is when some one force's them self on someone else's love intrest/wife who hate's it at first but after being awhile during the forced part starts to enjoy it or starts to enjoy it after being forced/or blackmailed to have sex to the point they then don't give a crap about there love interst/husband most of the time end with the person screw the love intrest/wife infront of the love intrest/ husband making fun of them telling them how much they love the person screwing them and him being better then the love intrest/husband most of the time they end with the love intrest/husband either losing there mind from not being able to handle it and runs away screaming or he kills himself. you do the stealing part right but not the end result of the ntr.
Everybody asking for this thing to do a fix about anyone other than sasuke don’t waste your time this sasuke fanboy fag can only write these shitty si sasgay because his real life is pretty fucking shit and the fact that a few of my favorite authors actually like some of this shit is really disappointing
Can you do a Naruto cuckolds Fugaku? I wanna see him gang bang Mikoto.
NO MAN CAN MATCH A UCHIHA IN BED IF YOU WANT PROOF ASK MINAT AND NARUTO. KUSHINA IS SO SEXY FORGETING TO TAKE BIRTH CONTROL .
love all your cuckold fics. kushina is always a must read.though i felt it could this one could have been better not that it was bad. i like a little reluctence at first but it fades away when bliss kicks in maybe like kushina shouldnt hav known and sasuke dropped the jutsu a few moments before she came so she could see what minato cant give her as she screams his name minato lets out a gasp at what he sees and hears coming out of the shower naked his little puny member rock hard as he himself cums hands free the largest load he ever has in his life mainly because he was so turned on at seeing his wife riding reverse cowgirl sasuke uchihas 9inch thick veiny cock his 2inch weewee couldnt handle it but anyway i should stop rambling lol. ANYWAY AWESOME FIC YOUR STILL THE BEST ON AFF
Huh. Not too bad. It's what I've come to expect with reading your stories. Didn't expect the invisiblity thing and I always do enjoy a Kushina fucking.
Please stop posting Yout shitty Sasuke's Fics.
I have nothing against Sasuke,
but dude, It's Naruto who has Yang Chakra of Hagoromo, so his Body.
You are really a shitty author with all Sasuke Playboy fics.
Sasuke is the guy who doesn't care of girls.
Awesome work. Keep it up.
This was an enjoyable read, especially since it uses a criminally-underrated ability.
There is an invisibility jutsu in the Naruto canon, created by Jiraiya. I'm surprised I haven't seen any Naruto stories use this idea before.
Bonus points for Kushina in this story. Not only is she as hot as ever, her deduction that it's actually Sasuke just proves that he'd have to work harder to fool someone who's been a ninja since before he was born.
This actually kinda reminds me of the movie "The Entity" in which a woman is molested by a perverted, invisible spirit. Except that was horror and this is fun.
Sex is written as hot as always, and the 'plot' was even original. And Kushina is always a must read for me.
But then it is once again mega-cock sasuke. I really have nothing against him, in fact I don't understand why so many people hate him so much... Still, I would love to see you write about other male characters sometime, for varieties sake.
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