Reviews for Fuck BrothersBy : BigE2955 |
Nice chapter, possibly my favourite story of yours.
Really appreciated that you let Naruto take Sakura's virginity, Naruto and Sakura is one of my more liked pairings. Also, good idea to no limit yourself to the obvious 'one-girl-per-chapter' format. I believe that will really allow you to develope more on the already existing characters.
One thing I noticed when reading the story again today, was that in the first chapter you mention both Mikoto and Kushina being alive, something I missed the first time reading this (how did I miss this?), I guess (hope) that means they will both feature at one point or another?
Really hope to see more of this great story. Seriously, you can't update quickly enough.
Huh, good to see you started this again. It's a very interesting theme. Keep up the good work and enjoy yourself.
Such delightfully smutty writing!
I know it’s not a new basis, but I really like your take on the conquering heroes of Konoha. Can’t wait to see who they get into next.
I hope Naruto gets Hinata’s virginity.
I want to like this story so I’m hoping that this shit stays equal between them but I can’t help but feel that you’ll start favoring sasuke more
Absolutely fantastic and hot. I especialy love how the two of them are pretty content and aren't trying to one-up each other here. It's a nice difference. I can't wait to see more.
Ok I'll admit this definitely has a lot of potential! Not to mention it's fucking hot as hell! I definitely loom forward to more chapters!
Interesting story
Ino?😐
This is actually a pretty unique idea. I honestly have never seen one which uses both Naruto and Sasuke as equals with a harem together. But I'm definitely interested since I like both characters. Hope you update soon. That goes for any of your stories. I enjoy all of them.
Not sure how original is the idea, but I've never read a story like this, or with a premise like this, rather. It's good as first chapters go, a bit more depravity, dirtiness would do the story good. Also, Ino's great, rarely see her in first chapters of stories. So I'm sold, see you in the next chapter.
Thank you and good luck, BigE2955
Its good to see this two not cucking eachother for a change i look forward to this a nice change of pace they are pratically brothers cant wait to read more.
I am already loving this story. Naruto and Sasuke, best friends, practically brothers, having basically equal cocks and stamina, and they will now go on a journey to bang every woman possible. Next should actually be either Sakura or Hinata. Or hell, both. Sasuke seduces Sakura, while Naruto seduces Hinata. Then once they fuck the girls enough, they reveal themselves to one another and the girls are too much into sex to even try to go against them.
So are other universe's girl safe even?
Either way, I think this is a good idea. If Naruto isn't getting upstaged and they are perfectly equals, I think it'll take off some of the hate that you wrongfully receive.
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