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Reviews for Naruto's Fetish (Remastered)

By : BigE2955
  • From joeparas1988 on July 13, 2017

    Kinda hoped you'd try something a little different to be honest.

    It's a bit different in tone I guess, less ridicule being thrown Naruto's way etc, but at the end of the original story, it felt like you were trying to squeeze blood out of a stone.

    Write what makes you happy I guess.


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  • From Venoms160 on July 13, 2017

    Have you ever read Kate Sex bomb? 

    I think it follows the general theme of your story (except it switches Naruto with Sasuke but removes the "sexual incompetence" aspect and replaces it with apathy Vs passion.

    I was sad to find out that the author of that hadnt written anymore Naruto stories. His plots and writing style was very interesting.

    And hey, 3 reviews to a single chapter! You're welcome 😋

     


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  • From core123 on July 13, 2017

    I think naruto really wouldn't have any problems with his cock size because it would be naruto who would have bigger cock as he possesses great yang energy and kyuubi chakra and six path chakra  so naruto would be filled with life and yang energy so naruto body would be great and naruto would have bigger cock


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  • From Venoms160 on July 12, 2017

    Also, tbh 4 inches is kinda way below average. Maybe go in the it's short and thick while sasuke's is longer instead? 

    Idk porn logic lol


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  • From Dai on July 12, 2017

    A much better improvement. I noticed you even changed some of the fetishes they had, chanigng Hinata's to enjoying cum in itself. XD

    Seeing how Naruto himself noticed how big Sasuke was when they went bathing together was nice, as he himself realized. And I did enjoy how he was even knocking off people he had been thinking off earlier. LOL XD So it's not just me. Everyone things that Shikamaru would likely fall asleep during sex. I think Temari might be the most sexually frustrated girl in the series. 

    The reactions of them all were nice. Hey, you even took what I said, where Hinata insists that size wasn't what was important. And the little touch where she was ecstatic with how hard Naruto fucked her made her feel great as well was also a nice touch. Pity that sooner or later, she would only know how to feel Sasuke's cock and Naruto can only be a cuckold.

    To be honest, I personally dislike that word, but it is what it is here. I look forward to reading a bit more of this. Would even give me ideas for my own fic.


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  • From Venoms160 on July 12, 2017

    I actually do like this better. 

    Though, by hentai logic NTR only works with a difference in Cock size, it's good that you're (at least) trying to add in personality differences as well.


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  • From Vilchez on July 12, 2017

    I think you mean UCHIHA Sakura. And btw what is she getting out of all this? Other than being fucked in the ass. Kinda seems unfair.


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