Reviews for Naruto's Fetish (Remastered)By : BigE2955 |
Not a bad chapter. Keep up the good work. I 2nd Dangerous_Zombie. I wouldn't mind a reverse version with Hinata being a cuckquean.
Hey there, have you ever thought of making a reverse version of this where Hinata has a serious cuckquean fetish and enjoys watching her husband fuck lots of other women?
This story sucks a whole lotta ass fuckin faggot sasuke dick rider
Nice chapter, hopefully hinata spend some time with Sakura.
Really liked the focus being on Sasuke Naruto and Hinata in this chapter. The other characters like Himwari Sarada and Sakura should deffinatly be in this fic but should stay secondary characters.
It's weird, but in my mind's eye I just replace Himawari with her aunt's body and character. Don't understand why.
I'm just wondering when her daughter will give Hinata one of her dildos to survive that month.
If you do a sexy no jutsu with naruto couldn't naruto just do one jutsu simular for his size change since its the same thing and both are physical transformations right? Other then that I kinda wanna see hinata emasculate naruto and maybe use abit of light femdom, I can see naruto being a sissy and/or another person sasuke has "broken".
Something that I felt was missing in the original:
It would probably make sense for Sasuke to ask / manipulate Hinata to femdom Naruto (or Naruko). As for Sasuke's plans making a chain of command with Hinata above Naruto makes a lot of sense.
When will you update Loveless?
I'll be honest, when Sasuke said someone had the honor to get him hard, I thought it'd be Naruto who did it. Now I'm just wondering how long it'll be before Naruto starts servicing Sasuke in his Oiroke no Jutsu form. And we know it's gonna happen sooner or later.
I'm also wondering if Sasuke is gonna get 'Naruko' pregnant in the remastered version compared to the original.
Really good except the part with Naruto still in his male form jacking Sasuke off. Gets kind of weird when you have Sasuke have Naruto do things like that in his male form when your supposedly writing Sasuke as strait.
The decrease speed and changed timeline of the remastered fic is really better, but I was a little horngry waiting for Naruto's humiliation to take a next step. Finally!
One thing I'd like to see improved: Himawari's importance to the story. In this chapter that basically happened a little, because Himawari is the reason Sasuke is upping his game with Naruto and Hinata. More plot intersection like that please! :D
More twisted and depraved, now you are talking my language.
This is finally getting interesting! About time the cuck was humiliated like that! Do it some more in the next hcap pls!?
Great chapter. Can't wait for 11. Hope you introduce Naruko again soon and mabey have Hinata be dominate towards her. Seems like you want to make Sasuke insanely controlling so, you could have him pit Naruto in her Naruko form and Hinata against eachother for his favor and his personal amusement.
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