Reviews for Uzumaki GameBy : Levi-The-Great |
Continuation please 👍👍👍👏👏👏
Amazing! First chapter and I'm already hooked. I hope to see more busty MILFS taken along with a certain auburn haired along with blonde haired kage.
I love. Me encanto, simplemente magnifico, lamento no expresar mi gran amor a su historia en su idioma, pero wow. Espero que continue con este gran proyecto.
This is some great stuff. Love the buildup to the actual sex then the fall of Mikoto herself as she gave in to the pleasure.
Really like this so far. It's certainly different from most 'Naruto dominates the Uchiha' smut.
Gotta admit though, as long as I read the name 'Mikoto' somwhere I'm sure to read it :-/.
Personally I wouldn't mind you NOT including the typical girls (Sakura, Hinata, Tenten, Ino, Temari etc) and maybe go for the more unused ones?
Like: Natsu Hyuga, Honoka, Shizuka, Sara, Shion, Matsuri, Yukata, Koyuki etc. ... Sasukes not yet introduced twin sister?^^
First chapter and already getting to the good part of the story. I'm definitely interested in reading more and hopefully soon.
I wonder who will be the next girl, I'm also wondering if there is an actual plot line to all of this(of why naruto is doing this?) or is it just pure smut?
There was some minor mistakes but nothing serious
Will Sakura be a conquest from the client guy? And if not can you make her a conquest of Naruto
More please stories like this are a rarity nowadays it's good to see one where Naruto comes out on top
Amazing story
will there be any sexy other kumoichi like Kurenai, Yugao (with boyfriends)? also for dominating the Uchiha can you do "special" chapter where yugito WAS captured successfully and fucked by Uchiha guys multi times? i know werid but not enough yugito lemons...
From the looks of it and the allusion of her having had sex with that rando guy, I'm super bummed that Sakura won't be a conquest. But I digress.
This was insanely good. Your formatting, grammar and spelling were very good. Can't say near perfect as there were a few instances of a word missing in a sentence making it where I had to insert the word myself. But that was few and I don't recall seeing any punctuation or spelling errors.
Anyaays, keep up the fantastic job and spread the pregnancies around!
A great start to the story
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