Reviews for Kushina's LustBy : animehentaiworks |
Pls update this ..I really want see more of kushina cheating
Continuation please 👏👏👏👏👏👏
The story is ok but when will the beast come into the picture since you have Beast under the content tags so when will Kushina get it on with a beast
Interesting chapter
You need to work on your English or atleast use spell check. It was bearly understandable at times.
My guess is that her third lover will be adult Naruto
not bad on the new update wish it was longer but still good. maybe u coudl have kushina do a body guard mission say the 3rd is goign to see some old friends and hires kushina to escort him there. and u can guess what happens
Don't really mind Kushina fucking around, though I think she should be the one in charge with most of them.
As for a scene with Sasuke... how about, Sasuke thinks he can turn Kushina into his slut, but in the end she shows him just how inadequate he is (at least for her)
I guess there are some holes in the story. E.g. what you implied about Tsunami. So Naruto and Kiba fucked her? Or not?
Do you plan to have Naruto and Kiba have the same women?
Lastly: Your writing could use some refining. E.g. writing the first word of a new sentence with a capital letter. And writing names with capital letters. Shouldn 't be to difficult, but it really makes reading it so much easier
How about showing Kushina's wedding night where she got fucked by every male except Minato?
just found this story and its different. looking forward to see what happens in the next chap.
I hope the grammar is better in the future chapter .
please have Jiraiya take a turn!!!
I understand that this is most likely just a prologe chapter and you're just setting the direction of the story but it wwould be nice if things were a little more fleshed out/descriptive then they are right now otherwise great story so far can't wait to see how it progesses.
Like the story and the concept, but be more descriptive don't rush in the stories sentence format.
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