Reviews for The Restoration of the Uzumaki ClanBy : BigE2955 |
That was.. bizarre. Locked in a closet as a sex slave to be used in a personal glory hole? Very weird but interesting. I kind of liked it.
You know, I don't think I've ever seen Mebuki put in a harem. She's just so... plain and not at all aesthetic that most people wouldn't even reference her. It's kind of interesting that you did.
What the fuck even was this chapter
Kiba is even more of a meme than he is in canon, lol.
I had very low expectations going into this, but it was actually alright. I didn't mind it. You've actually interested me in the backstory. Sasuke died heroically apparently, and I wonder how. Tsunade is a cockslut, but how? Makes me want to find out.
It would be great if the story had some bi element. I mean, it's already close enough, maybe if kiba or asuma could prep naruto instead of their significant other, or maybe clean him instead.
Great story. Really hot how you've got sakura and Naruto teaming up in the dominating. The Kiba chapter was especially great. I personally prefer Naruto being the bull to your stories where Naruto is constantly getting cucked himself, so I'm glad you're also using your talent to switch that up a bit.
Cool story. I like Tenten and loved how you portray her in this chapter and feeling very submissive to Sakura. Though I feel there's some background that I'm missing. Maybe a prequel chapter with Tsunade could fill in some blanks. Hope you can continue this and good luck with the new remaster of Naruto's Fetish.
Dropping another review for encouragement to get the next chapter out quickly.
Fantasic job so far. Excellent grammar, spelling and format. (A welcomed change from the usual shit posted on fanfiction sites) Please keep it up!
Big fan of all your works posted on this site. You've shown you could be diverse and unbiased with your stories and that's something I can respect. So far with these three chapters, I can say that this is my favorite story of yours. Hopefully you continue this and I am very curious where things will be headed. Also, hopefully we some Samui later in this story since I loved her interactions in The Lone Wanderer.
Interesting story
I definitely enjoyed the hell out of this. I wanted to enjoy your stories, because you are a fairly decent author with great description and above average grammar and comprehension (granted with all the shit that gets posted on fanfiction sites, most utter garbage in all 3 categories), but you mostly write about Sasuke. Cannot stand than annoying fuck in fiction or canon. But this story I can definitely get behind.
Excellent job so far, although I do hope you make Sakura the dominant/possessive one, and naruto a more gentle and possessive master.
But please, spread the Naruto baby making around quickly. I hope you can update this one like you did with Lone Wanderer.
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