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Reviews for Dominos

By : BigE2955
  • From ANON - xiaomaome on June 26, 2018

    damn, this is hot. Sadly, it will not be continued


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  • From ANON - on April 26, 2018

    Update 


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  • From The_King_in_White on October 08, 2017

    You give exactly what you promised. Naruto is only interested in breaking and owning, and there's nothing wrong with that. Good to see you kept his character like that, what with the blackmail and plans for future blackmail, rather than giving into temptation to make him a 'good ugy'.


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  • From Dai on July 11, 2017

    Nice. I look forward to the NTR stories of yours. Would actually help out with mine as well. I'm new and just recently started. And the fact this is purely smut where Naruto just makes the girls submit to him fits a place like this, since this is adult fanfiction. X3

    If you don't mind, would you take a look at the fic I wrote? It's similar to yours, but from a different series, Megaman Starforce, featuring Solo. 

    http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090387

    He's a bit like Sasuke somewhat in personality. Appearance he looks almost alike in form, but coloring is different. XD

    https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/megaman/images/2/26/Solo.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20090603052244

    But anyways, if you could take a look at the fic and read it up, and also leave a review, that would be great. 


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  • From Sovereign on July 07, 2017

    I like this one (like most of your storys).

    Personally I hope you concentrate more on this story (along with 'loveless')


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  • From Gamesofdark on July 02, 2017

    a great start! i look forward to more!


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  • From xxeric on June 23, 2017

    bueno


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  • From TheSinful on June 16, 2017

    Suggestion: Have Yoshino have to negotiate with Naruto due to her slacker son's poor grades. Yoshino never gets any love.


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  • From TypeAlphaAnarchy on June 10, 2017

    I prefer this kind of fics to your other ones and seeing as dominoes don't only fall once, I would suggest the following to join the trend: Konan, Anko, Mei, Kurenai, Tayuya, Shion, Ayame, Mabui, Samui and Hanabi just to show his wife that no one is out of bounds.


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  • From Kminari on June 10, 2017

    Thanks for the story, I did not find any spelling mistakes (I did not look exhaustively).
    Waiting for more chapters in this series.


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  • From YamiNoKami on June 08, 2017

    Have you ever thought of doing a story featuring the Raikage NTR Hinata from Naruko? I'm honestly not a fan of cuckold Naruto stories.


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  • From Naruto-Gremory on June 08, 2017

    Awesome beginning !

     


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  • From core123 on June 08, 2017

    I got a request  can you write a story where hiashi hyuga has a Fetish  of beaing cocklod by a young big dicked Naruto . And Naruto cockold's hiashi hyuga .A young big dicked Naruto fucks hinata's mom with hiashi watching and jerking off 

    Hiashi cock size is 3 to 4 inches when fully hard and Naruto's cock size is 7 to 8 inches

    Or 

    Where minato has a fetish of beaing cocklod by young big dicked boy (sasuke ) minato as young sasuke to fuck his wife with minato jerking off while watching

    Minato cock size is 3 to 4 inches when fully hard and sasuke cock size  is 7 to 8 inches

    Hiashi should be asking  naruto to cocklod him 

    The same with minato too he should ask sasuke to cocklod him

     


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  • From TheSinful on June 08, 2017

    Works for me. My problem with the Lone Wanderer was the bits of romance. Didn't feel like they fit the story (ie Konan becoming a slave to Sasuke's cock then they act like a couple) and didn't feel like they fit Sasuke either.


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  • From KanamiUzumaki on June 08, 2017

    Damn man loved the chapter i just hope that you will add Kushina in Narutos harem.


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