Reviews for DominosBy : BigE2955 |
damn, this is hot. Sadly, it will not be continued
Update
You give exactly what you promised. Naruto is only interested in breaking and owning, and there's nothing wrong with that. Good to see you kept his character like that, what with the blackmail and plans for future blackmail, rather than giving into temptation to make him a 'good ugy'.
Nice. I look forward to the NTR stories of yours. Would actually help out with mine as well. I'm new and just recently started. And the fact this is purely smut where Naruto just makes the girls submit to him fits a place like this, since this is adult fanfiction. X3
If you don't mind, would you take a look at the fic I wrote? It's similar to yours, but from a different series, Megaman Starforce, featuring Solo.
http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090387
He's a bit like Sasuke somewhat in personality. Appearance he looks almost alike in form, but coloring is different. XD
https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/megaman/images/2/26/Solo.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20090603052244
But anyways, if you could take a look at the fic and read it up, and also leave a review, that would be great.
I like this one (like most of your storys).
Personally I hope you concentrate more on this story (along with 'loveless')
a great start! i look forward to more!
bueno
Suggestion: Have Yoshino have to negotiate with Naruto due to her slacker son's poor grades. Yoshino never gets any love.
I prefer this kind of fics to your other ones and seeing as dominoes don't only fall once, I would suggest the following to join the trend: Konan, Anko, Mei, Kurenai, Tayuya, Shion, Ayame, Mabui, Samui and Hanabi just to show his wife that no one is out of bounds.
Thanks for the story, I did not find any spelling mistakes (I did not look exhaustively).
Waiting for more chapters in this series.
Have you ever thought of doing a story featuring the Raikage NTR Hinata from Naruko? I'm honestly not a fan of cuckold Naruto stories.
Awesome beginning !
I got a request can you write a story where hiashi hyuga has a Fetish of beaing cocklod by a young big dicked Naruto . And Naruto cockold's hiashi hyuga .A young big dicked Naruto fucks hinata's mom with hiashi watching and jerking off
Hiashi cock size is 3 to 4 inches when fully hard and Naruto's cock size is 7 to 8 inches
Or
Where minato has a fetish of beaing cocklod by young big dicked boy (sasuke ) minato as young sasuke to fuck his wife with minato jerking off while watching
Minato cock size is 3 to 4 inches when fully hard and sasuke cock size is 7 to 8 inches
Hiashi should be asking naruto to cocklod him
The same with minato too he should ask sasuke to cocklod him
Works for me. My problem with the Lone Wanderer was the bits of romance. Didn't feel like they fit the story (ie Konan becoming a slave to Sasuke's cock then they act like a couple) and didn't feel like they fit Sasuke either.
Damn man loved the chapter i just hope that you will add Kushina in Narutos harem.
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