Reviews for The SpotlightBy : BigE2955 |
Hinata being written as such a sexual, unapologetic character is amazing. The manga would be much more interesting if they portrayed her how you do here. I thought it was adorable that Himawari dresses like her mother and that Boruto is super protective of them both. My favorite part was the bj with Kiba ;)
This chapter raises worldbuilding questions. Is this a shinobi society? The schooling structure kind of implies not.
...Iruka, you dirty bastard.
Hinata strikes me as a bit sociopathic here. I'm actually a little disturbed. I suppose my main question would be if Naruto knows what kind of slut she is.
What a dirty little slut Hinata is, love it!
Wow I've never read anything like this before, I love the concept, the fact that Hinata isn't "broken" but just loves cock is unique. I'd love to see what you have in store for this, I wonder if Naruto knows she cheats on him, maybe he doesn't know the details, but knows she sleeps around, I doubt the kids would know though. I hope Hinata gets really depraved as time goes on, getting gang banged in the TV station bathroom by anyone and everyone. This really is one of the most interesting concepts for a story I've seen, I really hope it continues.
Well, Hinata's a full blown whore here, using her body to get Boruto's grades up. Just noticed there was no dick measuring here much. Like she wasn't comparing Kiba or Iruka's dicks with Naruto's, despite Hinata saying that Naruto was big.
Wonder how many more fuck buddies she's got under her thumb and whether Naruto reveals to know or finds himself being in the dark of her more slutty nature with other men?
So basically a completely slutty Hinata in a modern day world that was corrupting her daughter. She's clearly doing these on purpose and realisitically would get fired, but this is fiction so they let things go cause ratings man. XD
But now I wonder, does Naruto even know that his wife cheats on him?
I'm really enjoying your NTR stories!
Would you consider writing a story like that with Ino?
have to say its different. cant wait to see what happens in the next chap
You brought me back with loveless and lost me again with this one just what is it with people dumping on naruto
Nice story.
Love all your stories. But i was wondering if you can make naruto the bull in the next story.
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