Reviews for LovelessBy : BigE2955 |
It’s weird, but the best Naruto/fem!Sasuke story is a porn. Great job, I wish there were more chapters.
Please if you get a chance update this story personally I think it's one of your best stories so please come back to this story.
I've said this before and I'll keep saying it; I love Satsuki's personality. The bathroom scene only reaffirmed that! Spreading herself open so he could watch his cum drip out of her was amazing!
I really liked how Satsuki gave him an amazing blowjob after Hinata's failed attempt. Poor Hinata-chan, so unprepared for her lover's delicious cock.
Great chapter, senpai. I can't wait for Hinata to find out what's going on! It'll be really good.
10/10
<3
I'm not sure how I missed this one earlier.
Nice story with the fem Sasuke. I like how you've maintained the character's personality even while gender bent. I do feel kind of sorry for Hinata; even if she is a flat and prudish character, it's sad to see her hurt. Of course, she had to be completely clueless that Naruto was unhappy which means she really was not paying attention at all.
The compare and contrast between how Naruto is in bed with Hinata vs. Satsuki is well written. My only question is will Hinata broaden herself to explore the carnal world of sex in order to try and keep Naruto, or will she crumble and crawl away in a broken heap?
Commence dankness:
I have to applaud you, good sir, first and foremost, simply on the fact that you actually decided to write a Reverse Netorare story (insert applause here).
The inadequacies of Hinata's sexual prowess are both facetious and disconcerting. She must try her absolute best for the protagonist whose actual name is eponymous to the entire series! Feminine wiles are useless unless you understand how to use them, something, it would seem, Satsuki knows intimately.
Speaking of devilishly alluring Uchiha Alpha Females, this hopeless pervert is, categorically, a fan! Her dark possessiveness of her "dobe" is both thrilling and slightly yandere-ish. Even before her terrible (depending on one's perspective) shceme to NTR Hinata the Cuck Queen, the intrinsic, stirctly platonic bond between the Avenger and the Noodle-lover was interesting, construing an actual spark of fondness and compassion underneath the desire to take.
Naruto's wet dreams, with Satsuki at the center in lieu of Hinata, were marvelous. I particularly appreciated the part where he had to essentially limp out of her place of dwelling, lest she notice his predicament of the erect kind.
Loosely hanging tongue type ahegaos are certainly crucial in a piece of fictional literature such as this!
Naruto's misplaced belief that a wet dream was tantamount to the real, fleshy thing instigated a few well meant chuckles.
The act of sexual intercourse itself was truly sensational! And Satsuki's dirty talk was spectacular, truly! When a person abases themselves, it's always a lust trigger, for this pervert, at least.
I thoroughly enjoyed this work of depraved fanfiction. You, my lewd friend, receive the Kinda.Adorkable Seal of Approval!
Salutations!
(how was that for a review, senpai!?)
Very great story is there more chapters being planned?
I really wish you would continue this fic, mostly because it contains aspects of an actual sexual affair (AKA cheating) rather than a dig bicked guy and sex crazed collection of women.
(or in other words 'wish there was more fem!sasuke')
Hinata needs to get her act together! xD
The first chapter was lots of fun and I especially like when Naruto and Satsuki finally "got together."
Need to see more of this man. Love seeing a Satsuki lemon. Don't think I've seen a Satsuki Naruto lemon where Naruto cheats on Hinata. What is the Uchiha's bust size?
This is like one of the best things I’ve read in such a long time.
So fucking good. I need moreeeeee
Hinata the cuckqueen, heh. This could get really interesting or really weird.
Also an interesting take on Naruto and hating Iwa. He's obviously getting emotionally invested and it's impacting his work life.
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