Reviews for Naruto's FetishBy : BigE2955 |
Uchiha Neiji ? Have not even seen him yet. You let me down not keeping up to date with the pregnancies, they could be utalized so well in the plot as well as smut situations. Please do not do the same with Hinata.
mhmm ... hinatas kisses are the best .we need some pov on her. need to know what she thinks when she shows some love to naru. hina could take pics of his crotch and stick them all over the kunoichi lockeroom .
This was a somewhat fun chapter, letting me see that it hasn’t been cancelled.
I really do wish people could start reviewing the story rather than flinging personal critique though... it’s kind of childish. Everyone has their own preferences :/
Nice chapter but very summary like
U got to be kidding me. can not find the missing part .upload here please
Aw Hinata needs to be more vocal. She was so perfect at the start.
really loved this one ,gona go read the rest now
Reread the fic cause its super hot and still waiting for another chap
First of all, Hinata would NEVER cheat on Naruto, she spent 14 years loving him to dump all that feelings. She would definitely never feel what she feels for Naruto for other person.
And the most I hate of this is Naruto being a Omega. Not even a Beta. You put Naruto as a coward, when we all know that he has the guts to confront anyone for Hinata or anyone he loves.
I buy Sasuke being a shitty person to Naruto, because, let's face it, that's what he had always been. What I don't buy is Sasuke being so lovey-dovey to everyone else.
Sorry, this is too OoC to be serious. This story makes me laugh.
Awww, I was kind of hoping for... more from Sakura finding out. But oh well.
And I'm still wondering, will the original Naruto ever get any more action from Sasuke as Naruko, and will original Naruto ever carry one of Sasuke's spawn like he clearly wants to?
This story is interesting. I don't like it because it's basically NTR, and I don't like NTR because it's my worse nightmare. And the way you write implies that Hinata doesn't love Naruto anymore, keep in mind I have only read the first 2 chapters. It is less a couole swinging and more a best friend ruining his life and taking all the important woman in his life. It could get better Idk, but that is why I do not like this story. It is not bad. I just do not like it because od my aforementioned reasons.
More interaction between husband and wife please. Maybe Naru can take Hina out on a awesome date or something. Not enough interaction between charcters in recent chapters ,very summary like. BTW Hina was quiet sexy with that orange sundress *naru's favourite color* ,she's already GLOWING.
Great chapter! I think it’s your best lemon ever!
also, a nice way to tie up some of the loose ends in the plot. Now all that’s left is Boruto.
more ! more ! more ! more ! MORE !
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