great new chapter. hope to see more. maybe sakura's med-jutsu can help give hinata sasuke's baby. they could explain it away to the village as hinata volunteered as a surogate to help restore the uchiha clan. and it would be a good excuse to move naruto's family into the uchiha compound.

Considering the effort you went to in purposely humilating Naruto with the whole eating out Hinata bit at the end, I wouldn't be half surprised if your character Naruto wanted to take the extra mile of being dominated herself via Sexy Jutsu at least once. This isn't to say that Naruto(Naruko) would always do this or that Sasuke would prefer such a thing on an extensive basis... But you gotta admit that it would be possible to happen and honestly, given the nature of Naruto's fetish makes it out like his character has some inherent subconcious flaw where he wants to lose, this idea does make sense. Especially given Sasuke is his biggest rival on top of being his best friend. And given Naruto's distant, but still there, relation to the Senju Clan, it's always a good use the line, "A Senju will always fall to there knees before the might of the Uchiha." Yeah, I know this works best with Mito or Tsunade Senju, but still...

Otherwise, I totally want to see Naruto watching Himawari with Sasuke and or both Hinata and Himawari. Additionally, it might be funny to have Sarada walk in on a Himawari scene if she was dating Boruto. If only to have a total WTF breakdown, not necessarily to setup some grand Uchihacest down the line. You understand of course? The idea is to shake up Sarada's personal feelings for the Hokage and her own parents, let alone whatever issues she has with Boruto(because let's face it, the kid is a tool).

Yup as I feared (when I hoped I found a actual Sasuke fan writer that I could like /support)  ends up being another writer who makes a fic with being (unsuprising) a Naruto NTR that almost every Sasuke lemon writer does. The fact that you claim that you dislike bashing, and Naruto harem fics, yet ppl make the near exact opposite only hurts your case too. Just thought i'd let you know why I have little to zero respect for Sasuke harem writers nowadays and why i won't continue following/supporting any stories you do from now on..

maybe to continue this you could have Naruto, Hinata, and the kids move into the Uchiiha compound.

Sasuke, Sakura, and Hinata sleeping in the main bed with naruto nearby on his couch.

with the kids understanding that Sasuke is the head of the household.

btw this is by FAR my favorite story you have done. i love the other two but cuckolding and humiliation are my bread and butter for porn stories XD

i LOVED this. cuckolding is my favorite fetish. i hope you continue this and maybe add cuckolding to some of your other stories.

Hey!

I say not bad. This is definitely a bit different work from your usual. If you need any "inspiration" or pointers. I'd look up Radiator and Markydaysaid over at hentai foundry those guys are legends!

I hope you continue to nurture the percentage inside you (as weird and creepy as that sounds)

Good try, but I think it fell a bit flat. Some parts were a bit of a boner killer really. I just ended up feeling really weirded out. But again, good try.

Between you and me I loved your other works but this one is a complete turn off on top of that you made naruto bitch made so sorry man if this one continues you lost a fan in me good luck in whatever you decide