So, now that Narut(k)o is Sasuke's cock slut, how will Hinata and Himawari react? And will we have pregnant Narut(k)o waddling around alongside pregnant Himawari and eventual Hinata (because you know Sasuke's gonna knock Hinata up at some point)?

Really liking the story so far, but I would love to see some more Naruko if you know what I mean ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

   It is your story. You write what you want to write and I have no problems your taste. But your reasoning behind it is shallow at best. You are bashing other writers for writing endless Naruto Harem stories and then you write this and others with a genreic (Surprise-2) Big Dick Sasuke fucking weak-willed women who worship his cock like a god. Your argument becomes mute right away and you end up doing what you hate others for except with a different character.

    My problem isn't that though. Their is just a severe lack of proper NTR/cuk fetish stories in the Naruto stories. 99% of the writers end up falling for the same stereotypes and have no depth to their characters/plot. So if one is simply looking for dominant big dick (Insert Character X) stories, their are a shit ton of those out there. For once, I would like to see NTR stories where the women are driven by their desires for physical pleasure but are xonscious of the repercussions of their actions. The psychology behind cheating and how/whether it affects their relationship with their husbands. Or a scenario where the husband isn't a pencil dick, but would like to see his wife pleasured by someone else and experience enjoyment in that act. But it seems that is too much to ask.

You gotta have some more Naruto sexy jutsu business going on. Some real business. 

Great story

I got a request  can you write a story where hiashi hyuga has a Fetish  of beaing cocklod by a young big dicked Naruto . And Naruto cockold's hiashi hyuga .A young big dicked Naruto fucks hinata's mom with hiashi watching and jerking off 

Hiashi cock size is 3 to 4 inches when fully hard and Naruto's cock size is 7 to 8 inches

Or 

Where minato has a fetish of beaing cocklod by young big dicked boy (sasuke ) minato as young sasuke to fuck his wife with minato jerking off while watching

Minato cock size is 3 to 4 inches when fully hard and sasuke cock size  is 7 to 8 inches

Loved this story, One of the only good NTR/cuckold out there. Reason being that Naruto was not a victim, he was a participent.

I think this is really one of the best cuck!Naruto stories I've read, but I lowkey wish you involved Sakura a bit more, like her having a threesome with Sasuke and Hinata. Sasuke would basically be fucking the girl Naruto loved for years but never got and his wife and daughter, that or Sakura teasing Naruto a bit about his situation.

Also in a AU situation Sasuke could've also fuck Kushina, but I think this story is post canon so it kinda sucks that she died.
But all in all, props to keeping everyone in your story happy about the situation without excluding anyone, that's refreshing to see in this kind of story.
It would be nice if you kept this story going for a while... Thanks and keep up the good work!

Once again, Bravo! A job well done! I don't even know if you've read my reviews let alone considered them, and it might be my imagination but I see snippets of it in there. This was well written! Good job! I know I've said it before, but I feel like you're really improving. 

good story i just feel bad for naruto its pretty fucked up

Or maybe try something based on this if that's more your style:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/InCase/216149/CommissionZelda-A-link-to-ass

I kinda agree with SEF's review down below. It makes it more enjoyable for me personally when everyone has fun. I'm sure that there are people who get off at feeling humiliated and peoplewho get off of humiliating others. I get it. It's smut, there is'nt supposed to be any logic to it. But adding some realistic tendencies makes it more fun. 
If you want, try exploring "Switch" by Reinbach. I find it hot as hell! While still staying on the realistic side of things. 
Good effort in writting though. I've noticed you improving your style, it'll only get better!

I feel like what stops any of these stories being enjoyable to me as that they're always OTT.

What starts as a fetish for seeing one's wife getting fucked by someone else always turns into the wife wanting nothing to do with their husband... who they still love? And the husband just being fine with that? It becomes unrealistic and cringeworthy. It doesn't help that the 'stud' always has an unrealistic penis size and the husband pathetically small.

If this is what you want though, far be it for me to say otherwise. Write what you want. This, like many other fics on this site in this catagory, just feel like troll bait.

Honestly? What I would find super interesting and unique in this catagory is one where 90% of the men have completely reasonable cock sizes (because being a skilled lover is much more than sticking a big cock in someone...), Naruto is an amazing lover, and he still has a fetish of seeing his demure, proper wife loaned out to other men. Multiple other men.

The fetish is still there and understandable, but you don't get the tired tropes I see popping up in this story and so many others.

Again, if this is what you want to write - power to you. Just offering a critique and, if the premise is Naruto having a hotwife fetish, how to better (in my opinion) capitalise on that.

If your fetish is just bashing Naruto and ruining his life though (which, admittedly, is another fetish) then completely ignore me, lol. It's been done to death though. The former sounds way more interesting to me.

So, constuctive criticism? On it. I'll be sure and be detailed since just stating your opinion isn't enough for you (even if it's enough for you when the review is positive).

For one, JapanHero has a point. For all the talk about how you hate Naruto-harems and -bashing, you don't do your case well in simply just turning around and giving Sasuke a limitless harem; with a fem!Naruto, no less. I don't think it needs explaining, but answering how you hate harems by writing a harem you wrote's transparent/presumptuous/hypocritical as hell.

Two, rather than continuously write generic lemons (foot long dick? Check. Ahegao? Check. Brainless, weak-willed, cock-hungry cum-sluts in place of actual women? Check. Congratulations! You're every Narutard at their worst!), you could have spent the time keeping the story shorter but with better content. For instance, maybe Sakura could have a fem!dom kink and the first chapter could have been spent discovering the joys of bondage, strap-ons and perhaps an 'appropriate' response to a wife rewarding a husband for indulging her kinks.

Perhaps with a threesome, planned for months later that would allow for a realistic progression from 'husband' to 'degenerate man-whore' rather than immediately springing it on the reader. And then from there, spend a bit of time on deciding which kink you were going to apply to each character and how to make the chapter more interesting/erotic to read.

Three - and in regards to this story specifically - there's a difference between cuckolding and netorare. Cuckolding generally has consent (which, admittedly, you have), mutual enjoyment (which, admittedly, you have) typically followed by affirmation of mutual love/'reclaiming' your sexual partner (...). Netorare instead relies on a level of sexual proficiency that speaks less of the male character's capabilities and more of the female character's startling lack of resemblance to most real-world females (experiencing full-blown/multiple orgams on simple penetration), humiliation of the male SO/spouse, the so-called 'bull' either taking the woman/cock-slut hybrid for himself, interposing himself into the relationship and eventually taking the place of the SO/spouse out of some strange attempt to bash in a smut fic, appeal to the fat losers who get off on that shit or just to rake in reviews for an author who lacks talent but craves reviews regardless of their content.

Four, actually take the time to develop a unique narrative. Nothing that I've read of yours is profoundly unique in any way. It reads exactly like it would if the protagonist was Naruto and really, the only difference here is a name and a few adjectives. Hell, Sasuke reads more like an amorphous blob of a male lead than his actual canon self. He distinctly lacks his particular brand of can't-handle-the-truth crazy as well as his stoic better-than-you attitude and while these are often Flanderized in fanfiction and the reason a good chunk of people hate the character in the first place, at least it would be something new and creative.

For instance: going by canon alone, it can be implied Hinata would never cheat on Naruto because complex plots like that rarely transfer over into anime/manga all that well. To make up for this, slow-burn, one-sided Sasuke/Hinata. Sasuke eventually realizes the futility of his seduction and instead relies on his Sharingan, perhaps to convince Hinata she's having sex with Naruto while in fact, Sasuke's the one giving her the D. This can be the entire fanfic or the trend can continue in a follow up chapter, with Hinata wondering where Naruto's change in pace came from all while Sasuke cackles evilly in the background at the thought of Hinata enjoying their time together as much as/more than the sex with her actual husband - while remaining none-the-wiser.

See? Two minutes of thought and to my knowledge, you have something that's never been done before as opposed to 'big dick, small pussy; love you long time.'

Which seems to be all people write these days.

Five, and this might just be a personal preference, humiliation is only as effective as the cause for punishment in the first place. Whether it be male or female, humiliation really only works when something's been done wrong in the first place. Putting it into any smut-centric story without just cause only makes you look  . . . bad. It's less of a kink and instead reads more as a way to bash a character unduly, because they just so happen to have the bad luck to not be the main character of the story.

That's all. I could probably go on, but it isn't really worth it. Personally, I don't enjoy your stories all that much. I'm not much of a fan of Naruto smut in the first place, due to how repetitive and boring it usually is (with a few exemptions) and when new story's pop up, doing the same exact thing most authors have been doing recently, it doesn't exactly pique my interest. But dismissing reviews, even if they're flames, and the people behind them is a pet peeve of mine as a reader. It's immature and reads a lot like you're stomping your feet because you didn't get what you want rather than trying to improve anything on your end.

Awesome story. I hope you will write another chapter or similar stories. Most people thing cuckold stories with naruto is about bashing him but thing is cuckold stories only have effect is people getting cuckold is the main character who is kind and love others someone like naruto. Naruto Sasuke cuckold-bull relationship works well because they are rivals.