and a council ignores those who complain only for complaining, there is a very big difference between a constructive criticism and a criticism only to annoy or displease (and even if you explain them in a random way there will always be the typical rat child who just wants to disturb), You like writing if you like, after all the internet and this page are for that.

WOW, I love all your stories, they are very good and seriously I am a fan of humiliating naruto hehehe, the truth to me if I like naruto but I do not know why I love seeing him in such situations, I hope you continue this story and maybe in some moment goals to boruto hehehe ;).
not as thought to make some history of ranma 1/2

hey could naruto perhaps be more humiliated?? like anal plug during normal day and maybe a half transformation were he cums from his small D from anal lol, luv it and dont listen to haters

If you don't like his writing style then why read his stories or even take the time to review it ? Some of you sound like raging cunts who are crying about naruto. If you want to read a story about naruto then go find one. This author is not out here for you and only you. Get over your selves. A lot of people enjoy this person's work so leave it at that.  Get the dick out if your ass if you take the time to bash the author. I would love to see a story you negative cunts can write 

Lol, Cuckboy! That's perfect. These reviews are hella funny.

Anyway, your rant was an obvious lie. You're transparent and your work clearly shows that. A fan of Naruto? You took the time and effort to write a multi-chapter story of humiliating and sissifying one of your favorite characters because of a fetish interest.

However, you won't write a story where Sasuke is victimized despite cuckold, sissification and humiliation being your kink?

Ha, the double standard.

Get out of here with that noise, Cuckboy.

You're just a hater joining in a bandwagon that circle jerks each other on bashing a fictional character. If you wanted to explore SasuHina erotica, you could have written a pure vanilla story instead of trailing the humiliation route.

That would have been far more original within this over saturated fandom archive filled with Naruto bashing erotica.

But then again, you're not original.

Hah, I'm far less 'offended' by Naruto's portrayal in your 'cuck' stories than I am by the portrayal of the women. Offended is a pointless term in general, I should say dislike. 

I just find the cockslave/worship behaviour super unappealing or not titilating in the slightest. It's also not how sex works; stick in big cock = profit! only works in porn. I get that some people like seeing that in their erotica though. I just find it odd what people object to tbh.


Mainly it seems pointless to complain about a cuck in a cuck story, but I can buy it if the complaint is a lack of realism breaking immersion. None of this has anything to do with this story or this chapter though so feel free to ignore, lol. Decided this story wasn't for me a while ago and just popped in to see if there's any updates on other ones :p

cool love lust and fiendship next .

NO HA AH AH AHA HA HA HA HA AH AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA sigh needed that laugh really that rant just made my day today it was funny as all hell those link you don't even work on those anymore barely progressed in them but how many naruto cuck ntr stories you've completed and still either rewrite or evolve on tons all of what you just ranted its just basically hypocrisy in it's self at its finest so as a uk dignitary once said to russia go away and shut up just go back to writing your sasuke worshipping stories you've already proven to some of us that you hate naruto i mean why else would you sissify and bash him each chance you get?

Can you believe it ? The haters took time out of their lives to read and Comment on your work LOL ! Why eple read what they fancey and leve alone what they hate ? I like what you write hence why  i read it . if see fics that like  i do not even bother with them .Keep writing !!!

Nice rant.

My problem isn't so much with your choice in characters as it is with the fact that you're just not a very talented writer. The plot is always weak (and for smut, that's just fucking sad), characterization doesn't exist (to the point where your characters only exist to further your plot; making them feel like lifeless, generic clones of one another without a touch of anything human to them), you manage to describe sex entirely without detail (defeating the purpose of smut in the first place; fiction is meant to engage the imagination, which is awfully hard to do without anything engaging on your end), the less said about your dialogue the better (stale at best) and your creativity seems to begin and end with the story's overall kink (Naruto's Fetish; good idea in concept, unfortunately is no different from any other shittily told NTR story (which happens to be the case in a lot of your stories)).

But people pay you to write this, so the chances of you actually improving are nil. You're not as bad as megamatt09 is with Harry Potter fanfiction, but you're certainly not doing the Naruto fandom any favors with your substandard skill as a storyteller.

How about you post those links of other stories were these characters are cucked by Naruto? Show a link of a story where Sasuke is cucked and humiliated by Naruto.

You won't because there aren't any stories of a sort out there aside from Kage Sexbomb. Even then that plot element isn't the focus of that work.

On this website and hentaifoundry, Naruto being made a victim is a dime a dozen. Be it his wife--either Hinata or Sakura in an AU--cheating on him, or him being sissified and humiliated are constantly posted here or there. The fact that people commission it as well is pathetic.

Take that bullshit that your spouting and shove it down your throat. You're a living meme at this point, Cuckboy.

Only come here to read your work

All the haters can suck sasukes big cock lol

#dont hate naruto meant to say lol