IT'S HAPPENING! PREGNANT NARUKO WHO IS SEMI-PERM. I do not care what I have said before, Naruko is best girl. This whole chapter was all her and by god was it my favorite in a while. Still Naruto needs to modify that so he can feed her chakra by the 10 month mark and keep her around for ever! Still bummed you didn't plan to knock Sarada up, she's the only real chance of the Uchiha clan continuing and not dying off. Poor Sakura, would have loved to see her and new Naruko get that team seven fucking...This chapter right here reminds me I need to read and review a wild night...cause honestly, no girl goes as good with Sasuke as Naruko does, excluding Sakura of course. You made all my dreams come true and Naruko must be featured in every story going forward! I'm kidding, but I would be a happy man if that was the case!

Naruto is too small to have gotten Hinata pregnant easily. Plus his jizz is too less and watery. So how did they do it ? Saved up sperm for weeks and had to have it inserted by a doctor think . Will hinata tell us how it happened in the next chapter ? Hopefully ...

haters getting aroused and angry reading your work haha. Keep writing dude 

32 chapters of the same story. An update longer than anything else you’ve done recently. The depth of your creativity is truly astounding. If you have a chance, try to at least write half a page for a story that’s unique, assuming you have time while writing chapter 33 and whining about reviews. 

I really hope Hinata has a boy and he looks EXACTLY like sasuke . update soon please.

this chapter was the beggining of a new stage in narutos life . he does not need to transform into naruko any time soon . So he gets to WATCH hhis alter ego and WIFE pregnant with sasukes babies . So Fucking Hot ! I was waiting for hinata to get preggo for a while . you will def knock that chapter out of te park . so many people are going to congratulate them and follow the pregnancy . konoha is gona be ablaze ! Hope hinata wears her wedding dress and naruto records this special moment in the next chapter !

I wasn't attempting to 'prove' anything, you insufferable cunt-scab. It's a review. Where people give you their opinions, whether they're positive or negative.

As far as my grammar goes . . . okay? I'm not the one writing a story. I'm not being held to a higher standard for giving my opinion like you are for writing a story. Even with bad grammar, poor structuring, it doesn't take away from your flaws.

And aside from perhaps "engaging", please point out what words were misused. I'll admit you have a point with my grammar/structure, but I'd love to see what exactly was misused in a fairly straightforward, simply worded review like my own was.

"You have no credibility to call anyone a bad writer." Quit grandstanding. I might not be a writer (this is fucking smut, retard, I don't need credentials or any skill of my own to review your shit; no one does), but I can certainly look at your stories and voice my opinion that your content is hardly all that different from most of the garbage posted to this corner of AFF.net. It's better quality, sure, but just because you're painting over dirt doesn't suddenly leave you or your stories worthy of praise.

Also, please; tell me where I don't get my point across exactly as I intended with the words I used. Aside from the fact that I'm not a fan of yours (and am therefore not using the "Hurr durr, lookit all the Narutards crying" argument as if it has any merit here; you do a disservice to Sasuke as much as you do to Naruto with your writing), I don't particularly see where I left anything to be desired.

Unless you're referring to the fact that I'm unwilling to suck your dick over your bland, second-rate porn. If that's the case (which I'm expecting it might be, you're quick to blast any negative opinion without acknowledging anything they're saying), then you can go fuck whatever fat sow brought you and your overinflated ego into this world.

Give a nobody a review, they're grateful. Give him a 100+, fifty to sixty percent of them positive and suddenly he thinks he's a connoisseur of fiction who's fully capable of proving all of his detractors wrong on the basis of his word alone. Irritating beyond the telling of it.

you should focus a bit more on the Lesbian aspects even if it's just in terms of while he's fucking them give some lesbian stuff like Hima eating out whoever is getting fucked.  Also include Sakura in this eventually an maybe even bring in Ino or TenTen lol

Great Chapter! I am so happy Sasuke will finally impregnate Hinata.

I was waiting for this since chapter one.

Keep up the good work!

Also, sorry for not saying this in my earlier review, but I see you took that suggestion of mine I PMed you on FF.net. :D

Great read. Glad to see you're really stepping up the breeding.

Jokes aside, it is good to see you branching out. I feel like in comparison to Hinata all the other girls are relatively shafted. Hima appears and gets impregnated, but drops off the map after that. Sarada and Naruko were kind of end game and so not really developed. You're fleshing out their development in these new updates, which is ace.

So it's gonna be an Oiroke no Jutsu'd Kage Bunshin getting impregnated and not the real Naruto in Oiroke no Jutsu?

Sasuke's lazy day was still a pretty great day. I need a full story with Sarada being main girl for Sasuke, it's freaking intoxicating. Sakura still doesn't know lol, Hima and Sara are best cheerleaders for Sasuke as well, and Naruko is such a good girl, she deserves all the action she gets. What a trip, I love every chapter and it all paced nicely and worked perfectly. 10/10 gonna read again. But for now, on to your other works of art!

Not much to say on this one, it was hot as usual, christmasy, Sarada and Hima are still the most adorable things ever, and Hinata is at a level beyond cumslut, thats amazing lol.

Hinata is a bigger slut than I have come to terms with, not that its a bad thingat all! Hmm, maybe its because Himawari and Sarada are best girls, but Hinata does not feel all that special anymore. It was still hot, they almost got caught! On to the next