Reviews for The Conquering HeroBy : CyberXIII & CyberXIII & CompassOpposites |
Great story as usual, everything you write is so hot
Very nice and sexy stuff. Also, will you make the growing girls bustier?
This is Niiiiiceee. Though I've got to be honest, I think giving numbers to Naruto's massive size would be a nice touch. Well, eventually. though given that he's been compared to farm animals probably measn that it would fit the "literal thrid leg" category.
... That his spunk has reguvinating and, if I'm reading between the lines right, semi-addictive properties was a VERY nice touch though.
@CompassOpposites got an ETA on the next chapter of that Incubus prince naruto story of yours by the way?
O and include heir sister and his mother Kushina please.
Whoa a vey good fic and is very very large continue this history Is very good.
Keep the good work.
I don't know what it is about extremely active and well endowed shoutas that I love. I think it's three parts. 1. It's kinda funny. 2. It's like the ultimate "good job bro" 3. And it's a sort of a twisted vicarious living, basically like having a perverted super power. That's it...
anyway the story is great almost didn't bother since it only had one chapter but I'm happy the summary drew me in. My only issue being that in the narutoverse he's not really a shouts right? If we go by old enough to kill old enough to drink old enough to fuck logic... whatever, I can't wait til the next chapter
thx ;)
Please continue this story. It's so rare to see a Naruto fic where Naruto isn't getting screwed or fucked (male or female), or its about him.
Good chapter, looking forward to seeing more in the future. Although, I'm not big on NTR, TBH, so I wouldn't get much out of that challenge of yours.
Admittedly, I almost thought that when Naruto ripped off Mikoto's bottom, he was going to shove his length up her ass. Would like to see that sometime, if you can manage it.
Good luck!
Good start, keep it up I look forward to Kushina and his sisters turn.
Interesting story look forward to more
Dayum good stuff cant wait for Kushina's turn thank you for something that isnt Sasuke
Very nice. Suggestions: Hana having to deepthroat Naruto after walking in on him pounding her mother's ass (or vice versa), Naruto "interrogating" enemy kunoichi (Kin, Tayuya, Guren, Konan, Suzumebachi etc), Mebuki giving Naruto a try after seeing the state he left Sakura in, and Naruto showing Yoshino the pleasures of a lover that isn't lazy.
This is hot and I want more please. The generic oversizing of everything gets biring after a short while, but it fits with the attitude of the story.
An interesting challenge, and one you seem well on the way to meeting. I llok forward to seeing where this story goes.
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