Reviews for The Lone WandererBy : BigE2955 |
Double trouble in the heatwave nice chapter not to keen on Gina but tensei was good
Hm, a surprise for Sasuke...
I'm going to guess that someone was already pregnant before Rias, either Naruko or Sakura. I'm leaning more towards the latter due to the timeline.
Sarada?
I'm excited to see where this mini arc leads. And I'm definitely excited over the vote for the new crossover character. Good chapter.
Honestly, I kind of did see something like this coming, if not who exactly. But even so, morning after pills exist so...
Also, still mulling over what this 'surprise' in chapter 25 could be.
I'm really enjoying the developing romance these past few chapters. It doesn't make Sasuke seem all that heartless and all. Tho I hope this isn't the end of you implementing a few more characters from different series. I'm still holding out hope that you might do a chapter with Rangiku or Erza or something like that.
That Sasuke x konan was so good π I just love the chemistry these two have I hope you build on these 2 for another chapter or two
but as always great chapter π
Rias is getting pregnant hmm thought I expected someone else but I respect your work
and damn yugao I forgot about her
awesome chapter π
The chapter till tsunami was good but after that with haiku I lost bit of a interest π
I respect how you carrying on with the story not bad
as always awesome chapter
Well I just read the last 4 chapters today and I can really say they were very good, especially as you handled the relationship between Sasuke and Rias. I think it was also good to see a bit of romance, the only thing that is strange is that nobody is looking for Rias especially because it was part of the nobility in their world. Anyways good job.
P.S. I really hope to see a cat girl at some point, especially because of the relationship that kept the Uchiha clan with cats.
I'm so sorry for not being able to review, but reallifew was hell in the past two weeks. I just inhaled the last 15 (????) Chapters! It's amazing how fast you write. And I certainly don't want this story to end any time soon.
I wonder if some characters might use sexy no jutsu to become temporarily a woman in order to have sex with Sasuke? Since Naruto is a woman already?
I also want to know if all Uchiha are this well endowedβ? Is Sasuke going to stumble on women with were Tobi's / Itachi's lovers and who tell a similar tale of Sasuke is doing? I bet in the end it all goes back to Madara again
I don't mind for you to slow down introductions, but there's still some girls like Shizune,Kushina and Kurenai among others that I'd like to see in the harem. Hopefully you get the chance to add some of them when Sasuke returns to Konoha.
Lol, guess I can do another review today. Make no mistake, I'll take well written smut almost all day/ everyday, but I'm glad to see it's not just, sasuke finds 30 warm places to stick it. So I am glad to see the romance added.
Nice chapter
Lol sorry I didn't manage to review again before now, pc is in the shop, and kindles are not the easiest device to write reviews on. Rias' writing off felt pretty natural, so that's good. Yugao was an attractive choice as always, the wave chapter was fun, and I honestly liked the kurotsuchi chapter, but unlike a lot of people these days, i don't just mentally adjust all breasts in my smut to dd. Variety is spice after all, my preferred body type is healthy. That's all. So thanks for a new chappie or 3, and I'll try and review again. Shooting for every 3rd as a minimum.
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