Reviews for The Lone WandererBy : BigE2955 |
It is weird that Sasuke has to go on a diplomatic mission to the Cloud Village given that that was what led to him being a world-wide criminal, but it works since Sasuke can now bang on a hot chick like Samui. Samui is one of the three girls I know from Cloud Village, so I wonder if she'll be the only one? Doubtful. XP
Now Sasuke got his very first virgin. Though one thing is that it's funny how the excuse was that he knew the entire time, when really the Sharingan doesn't work that way, but best to have an excuse to show that he wasn't all that bad before.
Sorry, guess I have a small tendency to work logic and fanfic at the same time when I know it doesn't work that way.
I like Sakura, but only if her bitchiness is not so profound. Hence why I don't like the Uzumaki Restoration one where she abuses her power and is a huge bitch to just about everyone, using Naruto's cock to make slaves of everyone else. But this one I am okay with cause its nice and sweet and she does have love.
Wow Sasuke, tell the girl that you're not exclusive to her AFTER you banged. You're lucky she's addicted to you.
A fitiing and well put-together ending for the story. Also impressive for the size of the story and the time it took to complete. Bravo.
Another great chapter for a great story, its awesome to see someone with your writing skills take an interest. Now that youre finished with this, you should consider different characters, you have been using Sasuke alot, but it would great to see not often used characters as MC, a story with Kiba for example would be cool
Welp, it was reaching that point and thankfully you have other stories in the line. There has been 40 days and more of enjoyment derived from this so thank you very much for creating a story of such great length. Rias with Sasuke's kid got lost after she was left Konoha so there were quite a few segments that were missed. I hope the epilogue sets things up for something else. Maybe the next generation picks up their parent's habits.
I will be sad to see this story go, but I look forward to what type of ending you'll create. Also, I suppose it would give you more time to work on your other Sasuke/Harem story, which I have prefered. All's well that ends well.
decided to fimally review: interesting Kushina chapter.
Really man, I'm dying here. Naruto has long twintails that are oftentimes forgotten when you randomly have Sasuke take her to town. Why hasn't he used them Handlebars yet? Cereal though, this chapter was great stuff. I think you've done more then enough setup for Sasuke to take them Bijuu and rock their worlds into Corporeality! Starting with the Kyuubi of course...
On a side note, like my comment in the discussion topic on the forums stated, drifting slightly into the idea of secondary characters for your Crossover characters might be a good idea. Granted I've made my case for Lucy pretty clear, but I bring this up here for the sake of the Bijuu and Rias... Why not pull out Kuroka considering Matatabi is also a Two Tailed Cat? It doesn't have to last forever, but just random plotlines that drift into how the worlds left behind are playing out while you run the main goal.
Very good story , and as the 100 the reviewer I would like to ask for kushina to be added .
Can Tsunade come back?
Not alot of Sasuke harem stories out there so props to you for having the guts to write one. Looking forward to what comes next.
Hey!
You're other story brought me here as well. Maybe look into Poison Ivy, Wonder woman (Diana) or Harley? All strong women characters you could make to be frigid and man hating but subdued by cock?
have fun writing either way!
Great story! World needs more Sasuke/harem fics!
If you decide to do another, by any chance, could you add more delicious detail and make Sasuke's mannerisms more aligned with his canon aspect?
I took a look at your poll, and I must say I'm interested to see who will be featured in this next chapter. Hopefully we can see it over the weekend! Although, I'm not going to tell you which one I voted for.
I wasn't much of a fan of this chapter although it may just be because it was relatively short. I'm still favoring your other work, but this one is a good distraction to tide me over while the updates come.
Best wishes.
Ah, so that's the one!! Yeah, love that pic too. Truth be told, I need to start re-commissioning some pics like that. Used to do those Sasuke/various girl panels from Tabe-chan, Kenno, Eridaiho, Jadenkaiba and ManiacPaint, just to name a few. Name on DA is blacxican and on fanfic it's whosajiggawhat.
And loved this new chapter. The week long sex-filled Tsunami was amazing but the one that took the cakek for me was Mabui. Bet you can imagine why. Looking forward to the next chapter to this and your other fic (which I need to review later)
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