Reviews for The Lone WandererBy : BigE2955 |
in the next couple chapters will you do a deflowering of Hinata chapter?
will there be mikoto or fem itachi in the future?
Good to know you're planning on using more Konoha women. That brings to mind another question, are you going to use minor characters like Fu or Shiho? What about filler or movie characters like Shion, Ameno or Shizuka? The Naruto series has tons of female characters you could use for a fic like this, so I'm hoping for some of the more obscure characters to get the spotlight too.
Not a problem, always happy to encourage good writers.
I can see what you mean though, something about this chapter just seems...off. I can't put my finger on it, even when I'm reading it. Hm. Food for thought.
Looking forward to the next one!
I'm just encouraging. I'm huge Sasuke Fan and you write him so well. Goods fics with him are rare and I'll do everything to get you keep writing.
Now i just wonder if the girls gossip about Sasuke. Who is willing to share and who is the jealous type?
Suggestion: At some point, have Sasuke make Tsume and/or Hana his bitch. Bonus points if one of the women walks in on him pounding the other.
Good chapter, and it's funny to see Sasuke listing off his sexual partners to Naruko when we don't know how many of them know bout each other.
Gotta say, I created an account just to review this story since you expressed how much reviews mean to you. Hope this helps, and keep doing what you're doing, you're on a roll.
On a side note, your last chapter was a double feed.
Oh I love how they're all lusting after Sasuke (and his cock). I wonder if that is an Uchiha thing? Madara seemed similarly build, after all. But that's just a headcanon of mine,.
The pace in which you update this fic is amazing. Please keep it up.
Hopefully you bring back Anko and have her actually have sex with Sasuke beyond just a blowjob.
I know Sasuke is going to leave the village soon, but could you still add more Konoha women to his harem like Shizune,Hinata or Kurenai? Maybe you could have Sasuke meet them during his travels and explain that they're away from the village because they're on a mission.
I'm amazed by your writing speed. And keeping up such a quality, it's amazing. Usually such stories don't go beyond the first few, so I hope we get many, many more. I hope Sasuke gets a bit kinkier in the future. More dominance or some bondage maybe?
I'm slowly starting to think that Sasuke is going to be reason why Naruto's time as Hokage was so peaceful. Satisfied Kunoichi is perfect diplomacy (unless they're fighting about him). I wonder if Kakashi is going to get request soon enough for Sasuke to visit this and that town again? Which would be hilarious, especially if Konoha has no clue that Sasuke is fucking is way through the continent.
Perfect capture of the characters, like always. I'm curious about Konan, though.
I really liked Anko. She's a woman that fits Sasuke's personality. Independent, strong and stubborn. Sasuke might be on a redemption trip now, but lets not forget that he still has a temper and a strong sense for justice. I can also see the influence Orochimaru both had on them, though it would've been nice to see Sasuke interact with Orochimaru. He's one of the few people he actually respects.
Karin ... I guess I wanted her a bit for feisty, but after a moment of thinking the virginity isn't that far off. Karin was in charge of Orochimaru's prison and never could trust anyone. Better to stay on the safe side than to sleep around. But yeah, Karin and always be a supporter for Sasuke. Her devotion goes beyond a normal harem girl, she's loyal.
Question though, will there be pregnancies later? Like, more than just Sarada? Sasuke developing a harem is a great way to restore his clan and with a few willing woman, it'a actually possible. Not that I want to read a family fic, I'm fine with mostly porn but given the amount of sex I guess it's bound to happen sooner or later.
Great fic so far but could you please add Fem.Kyuubi and Kushina to the story/harem. I only ask this cuz there are barely any ficus that have Sasuke/Kushina and basically none with him doing a Fem.Kyuubi.
eh, I think you missed a trick not having Tsunade roast him.
Could have made her a mature sex-bomb that put him and his ego in place a bit. It takes more than sticking a big dick in someone to be a 'sex-god', but whatever.
This story is so good I could cry. I just had to register and leave a review, because it's the only site I found the fic. But it's so worth it. I love dominant Sasuke fics and the ones where HE has a harem are far and few between. I'm pretty much open for anything you wrote so far. Question though, will there woman who are more submissive than others? Hinata for example. While people like Anko probably like a good spanking etc.
Otherwise: whoa at the writing pace! Please keep going, I'll read every single chapter!
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