Reviews for Uzumaki Kushina the Violated HeroineBy : BitterNTR |
Thanks for responding to the review from last chapter!
As for how the save works, I think either idea could work. It's more 'logical' if in a RPG and especially in the case of VH to be able to save wherever you want. Though 'reality' and the fact that Kushina is NOT a native to the VH world, means that she might not really understand that and thus only gets a 'save' screen during sleeping periods of time. This could lead to MAJOR screw-ups on her end, but that just means more sexy for us!
I wonder how's she'll take to the Doggy side quest and the impreg side quests (aka not having any money for the Innkeeper, Henry, etc. etc.)
Only other thing I can think of is will there be New Game Plus where Kushina carries over her stats from dying to the new game, or will she have to start from scratch all over again?
To answer the other response, had a Boku No Hero Academia idea I thought you might be interested in. Not sure how much you like Deku (or at all) but I've been seeing a lot of pics lately featuring him and Bakugou's mom. I think it'd make a very interesting NTR if Baku pushes Deku too far and he takes it out on his mom (and Baku is a mommas boy).
That's why I wanted to swap e-mails if possible ^^;
Damn that was awesome, but I hope kushina gets some stomach bulging from a giant cock.
Who cares about what I said it's fanfiction you can write anything so ignore my ramblings about shinobi history and fear. Now here are my serious questions: what type of build will kushina be and will another female character from Naruto's world join in on the fun???? Did her base stats revert because she was deaged. Here's an fun idea make having any type of sex give her some stat points like the lemon games I think that with fit in quite well with your story no?
"Response: What’s your point? One group sacrifices themselves and another gets away. That’s the same concept I literally stated. Once they see that their friends and comrades are dead, some would definitely feel fear and run for it in order to live for another day." Lies Most (or all wont run away, take cannon as eveidence Kumo shinobi sacrifice comrades and those that run are probably killed, and the other villages are the same if not more ruthless.Even Konoha is kinda like this, Kakashis Dad commited suicide because he choose his comrades over the mission thus he was shunned and hated, imagine if it was becase he ran away, they would put him to death. " And most were weak. They often felt fear, resulting in some battles being easier than others since the enemy would just run away" there is a difference in between running awayfrom fear and an tactical retreat" Heres some Shinobi rules that Kishimoto has written to refresh your memory
Pretty good so far. I am curious to see what changes there will be from the game and when Kushina will get some clothes. Perhaps she'll start wearing clothes when she sees what benefits some clothing/equipment can provide. Looking forward to more.
I would very much like to see kushina take charge of a rape as in furn the tables
Quite nice. Almost got herself raped but that only means she need to train herself back up to snuff quickly.
Damn it!! I was hoping to read some fucking
Ah well, i hope you well show some in the next chapter
"Shinobi were different. They were people. And most were weak. They often felt fear, resulting in some battles being easier than others since the enemy would just run away." Bullshit, most would never run away or else there commanders would have them killed, even in Konaha, one group would sacrifice themselfs so they other can live. It seems Kushina is the weak one here
What a great start. Look forward to more and hopefully that Raikage scene! Kushina stories are always great to read
an interesting idea. I've heard about VH, although I've never actually played it. Do you plan on doing the various 'bad ends' as omake?
I've never played Violated Heroine, but it seems like an appropriate setting for this version of Kushina to be in. Interested to see where this will go, good luck with more writing.
Looks good, look forward to reading more.
Love the idea of this fic!!! Also can you please use this Doujinshi as quest for Kushina, maybe one of her bad ends, anyway here it is https://nhentai.net/g/83509/
If there's actually people complaining about Kushina being a whore.... Well they're not obligated to read the story. I had fun scouring through the first chapter and I'm seriously curious about just what you've got in store for the poor (lucky) girl!
If there's deaths involved, at least make 'em as amusing as you can. ;)
Here's to hoping for a lot of hot encounters, though... humans and totally not humans :D
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