Reviews for Naruto: Learning His True SelfBy : TheDogSage |
1st i was forced to waste time making a account to say your story is still trash
it is well known what going to happen, the only plot twist i with you could handle to write thought i doubt it is naruto somehow manipulating the seal and changing it to his gain
With youki he could rebuild his "stuff" and strike back!
Though i know you will continue this flat as sakura story and go forward with this well known plot :/
This whole thing is trash.
I'm sorry, but there is literally no other word adequate enough to describe this disaster that you actually dare to call a story.
First off, there's the swift transition between what characters want and how they act, simply to suit your own twisted narrative. None of this is believable in the slightest. Naruto, who has hated what his father had become, who even hated his mother for doing that to his father, is suddenly a-ok with what Hinata tells him about in the 2nd chapter? No. That simply does not make any sense.
Then there's these last two chapters. Absolutely abominable. Repulsive, even.
Why are you writing? I'm genuinely curious. You have no talent whatsoever, the theme of this smutfic is disgusting, the person who requested the challenge even more so, so I'm really curious what exactly drives you on at the end of the day, to further pollute this site with drivel.
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