Reviews for Naruto: Learning His True SelfBy : TheDogSage |
How is this shit still here was hopping it begone only leftwing fags wight shit like this go away
I'm glad to see you haven't abonded this! Nice work!
Nice chapter, normally I don't enjoy this kind of story but it so well writing I can't help my self. I just recommend that you put a tag for cockhold on the story
You People are sick fucks and i pray to god that you never get involed in a relationship with a women ever and to the adult-fanfiction admins please invent a filter so for people who don't enjoy seeing naruto bashed or cucked to no fucking end day in and day out cause its unfair that every time that we click on the naruto section just wanting to red a decent naruto story its has to be either a Yaoi,Yuri or a naruto bashing sasuke and kiba worshipping fic it's ridiculous to the point where unless you're into gays and or cucks don't even bother clicking on this section and as for the guy who suggested a cuck fic involving tonrei, naruto and hinata keep that shit to yourself or invent a site that you and all the other naruto haters can go to to make your shit fantasies a reality seriously this is my challenge to all you naruto haters and cuck lovers make a site dedicated to that shit or a section here where we can know that yaeh stay away from that stuff unless your into that stuff really don't care that this gets deleted.
This story is so fun! Hope to see even more soon!
also, kylekatarn77@aol.com if you want a beta reader and/or someone to bounce ideas off of!
Wonderful story! More into the cuck, f-word side of things, making them cry but love it, but you have a nice blend of that and sissy! Can't wait for more! If you're ever ope nto bounce ideas with someone, or want a beta, please let me know!
Loved your story i hope you will continue this story further
Can you do a chapter where now that Naruto's in chastity, Hinata bounds him in something like a suspension rig or handcuffed in some way and Hinata does stuff like mock his tiny cock, punishes him for it like stretching his useless balls, flogging him, and pegs him? All while doing this with two other girls who do the same?
I love this story! I do have a bit of a challenge for you that is like a side story to this one. It involves Naruto, Hinata, and Toneri. Let me know if you want to hear about, because it sounds hot to me.
i hope you post a new chapter soon
A great story so far! Great descriptions and pacing.A very interesting plot twist with Kurama, I'm eager to know where're you going to take it.
I would really like a Kushina chapter.You know, about how she sissified Minato and got Kiba as her Bull.Maybe you could tell it in a series of flashbacks. I would also really like to see Ino.In this story or in another one like this, written by you.There's no Ino NTR/Cuckolding stories out there, and those are my two favorite things when it comes to Naruto fanfiction. I think you're one of the only people who could do it justice.
Needless to say, I really enjoy your work and hope this story is just a beginning of your path as an NTR writer. Thank you and good luck.
Is it wrong to want to see Hinata get into the seal and beat the crap out of the fox to make it her bitch??? Out of curiousity, how different would Naruto have been if the fox hadn't messed with him? And Naruto definitely deserves a cuddle session with Hinata after that revelation, maybe have him give her and Konohamaru a fashion show and pick out some outfits Naruto would want to wear????
You have the opportunity to do an original thing with this history, with the last revelations you have the opportunity to make an interesting twist in the story and so get out of the comfort of an argument that writes itself.
You can make a a interesting alliance between Naruto and Kyuubi, and that does not mean you can not keep making the argument Sissification or Crossdressing, but the minimum is to try to write some kind of revenge against Kushina by indirectly lead to this situation.
You can make a more original history that most people who write here only with a simple change of argument.
Seriously consider this option, please
Not gonna lie, I'm only following this story to see slutty Hinata and Kushina, cringing and hurriedly skimming the Naruto cuckoldry stuff. It's one thing if that genuinely turns somebody on, but you've got him being blackmailed into it and clearly depressed - and none of it is even 'true', given the most recent revelations.
It would be pretty fucking awesome, assuming Naruto really wanted out, if he made a deal with the Kyuubi to get at his hilariously abusive mother back in some way. A reverse cuckoldry, if you will.
Or maybe you just want to torture/mind break/ntr Naruto. I dunno. Not my thing though.
Boredom
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