Reviews for New Reality: Incubus Prince NarutoBy : CompassOpposites |
Continueing on the bloodline thing from my earlier review.
I noticed there was something similar to lines of bloodlines in humans in what I assume is both the 'old reality' and the past, that being the Uzumaki having long lives and powerful life-force. I don't think that is quite the same as something explicitly refered to as a bloodline limit in canon.
Great chapter
I noticed Hyūga's in this story have distinctive hair, because Minato told us. In canon, their most distinctive feature is probably their eyes, which not only looks different than typical human eyes, but is part of a Dōjutsu. The fact you failed to mention her eyes entirely and how different this setting is from canon, makes me suspect she has typical human eyes. It also makes me wonder if there is any sort of Bloodline Limits (in a more canon sense than being a fallen angel or yuki-onna or something). Also I'm wondering if in this setting Bijuu and Jinchuriki are still a thing.
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Please don't respond to this review part of the review: I suspect Hinata is going to have a unique relationship with Naruto as her introduction and Naruto's reaction to her seemed different. And by unique, I don't mean "she's the only girl he doesn't fuck". I suspect she'll becomes his wife or something.
Great story and great lemons
Could you do some lemons between minato and his daughters that would be hot.
Damn that was awesome.
Sorry for reviewing more than once.
Naruto's small size means he will probably have limmited physical reach. You mentioned him being able to emit energy from his horns. I can't wait to see what his fighting style is and if that is a part of it. I doubt it is simply seducing his opponent, as all his sexual partners so far have been female humanoids, and of course there is no guarentee his opponents will be in that category.
"Breaking" the girl? And Tsume told Naruto to demonstrate on her daughter? What a terrible mother! Not that I actually care if the characters are immoral.
Amazing chapter
Great story so far, looking forward for the next update.
Hopefully he goes to the one piece world.
Great work! really liked it though not quite sure why you made him 16 years old but are making it so his physical body is the size of an 8 year old kinda weird as i feel part of the appeal to straight shota is having busty women being dominated by young boys who barely understand sex as is but either way im extremely looking forward to more especally DxD and Fairy tail characters
This was amazing I can't wait for chapter 3
What other stories have you written that aren't on here?
Cant wait for the next chapter
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