Reviews for New Reality: Incubus Prince NarutoBy : CompassOpposites |
Naruto should share his harem because an incubus would have no problem letting other males join in to double team or even gangbang some girls.
Thanks for addressing me without being all butt hurt about it and I can't wait for the next chapter
You made it sound like a full 15 minutes is a long time for a newborn to breast feed. I heard that they take much longer (like an hour or something), because they arn't cordinated. So it's not that they drink alot, it's they, on average, drink slow.
I love this story! I hope Naruto fucks the whole village!
Great chapter
We? How many people are working on this fic?
personally i didnt realy like the minato smut, id much rather have some naruto smut instead
I gotta agree with RAWR on this one
I was worried the story was abandoned.
The explanation behind Naruto's apparent youth was interesting. I hope you elaborate on why he has to keep his power hidden later on. I half expect that if he didn't hide it, his presence would have a permanent and drastic effect on nearby females, including stripping them of much of their mind, like some kind of lovecraftian horror. I don't think that explains why it needs to be a secret though. I think the more likely reason is that if Naruto didn't conceal his power it would possibly (or maybe definitely) attract the attention of individuals, groups, or creatures that Kushina wants Naruto to stay beneath the notice of, possibly villains that have yet to be introduced.
Pretty sure that in canon, Shikamaru's abilities are better in total darkness, because existing shadows can contribute to the length of Shadow Imitation Technique, as demonstrated by adding to the distance while it was underground and the shadow of the wall in his fight against Temari. On the other hand, he wasn't using the Shadow Imitation Technique in chapter 5 of this fic.
I think Sakura would have known what type of demon Naruto was when she talked with Ino on the bleachers because of her recall at the end of the scene where she and Naruto had sex. Then again, memories don't always show up whenever they are relevant.
nice story so far looking forward to naruto futher adventure's and the fun he can find in the dungeons
I can't wait for Naruto to wreck Ino and Sakura.
(This is only about chapter 2)
I'm wondering why Albedo got pregnant considering succubi in this story need to want to get pregnant with all their heart in order to do so, and that the servants were trained to not give into temptation to getting pregnant from Naruto. I paraphrased the wording about the temptation, but it'd be weird if they were allowed to be impregnated by Naruto unless Naruto actively wanted to produce a child. Similarly why can't Kushina have sexual intercourse with Naruto getting pregnant if there is the 'can only get pregnant if the succubus wants to' thing? Does 'Uzumaki fertility' override that? Is the mechanism that prevents pregnancy purely emotional and not cerebral thing (and Kushina doesn't trust her control on her emotions)?
Going on the bloodline and eyes thing again. Maybe Hinata still has the distinctive Byakugan, but the eyes arn't considered distinctive because some non humans might eyes that look similar (perhaps angels, since that is what Naruto thought she was). Naruto probably has the most experience around the 3 lust creatures from where he lives so maybe fallen angels or something has those eyes.
In canon Himawari has access to the Byakugan, but her eyes look normal human eyes because Kishimoto forgot to make them look like Hyūga eyes. However Himawari's Byakugan looks like other Byakugans when it's active.
You might not be into this, but any chance of a futaNaruko scene?
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