Reviews for New Reality: Incubus Prince NarutoBy : CompassOpposites |
cant wait to see the part with rias and akeno.
I loved the first few chapters, but your latest with prof bitch...not so much. The incubus AU has enough interest to it, so adding in crossovers just makes the story confusing and weird. I'm looking forward to more chapters with Kushina, Hinata, Sakura, Ino, etc. Kushina'a scenes you wrote, like in chapter 1, were the hottest!! Your writing during Shizune's scene was also one of the best yet. Just please don't lose focus and make this into some non-Naruto fic :(
I have enjoyed the story so far, though the Minato lemon scene held no interst to me. Personally could you have Nauto decide to to Rias, Akeno and Hinata all for himself in teir one and just have him give Issei the members Risers harem when he shos up and have Naruto kill him. Rather then Naruto give him two of the girls.
Mate you have made quite the world here.
The way you incorporated everything into the naruto verse is just genius and your writing style is extremely impressive. I don't think i've seen a better writer on this site.
So i'm curious about a few things. Since you included highschool dxd in your mythos will you include all the girls? Reason i'm asking is because of Irina. She's my favorite girl and i was wondering if you could include her in the fun.
How many anime will you include? At this point you could really include any of them. I can see Shinmai Maou no Testament, Maouyuu Maou Yuusha, they don't even have to be demon anime. You included Assassination Classroom easily enough.
Though i do have a challenge for you if you'd like to accept it. If you've seen Yu Yu Hakusho include a girl of your choice from that. If you can do that you have exceeded my expectations. This story will become legendary in my eyes(pretty close to it already).
Anyway mate hope you keep up this pace. This story so far is honestly incredible and it's one of the few lewds stories i read where i actually care about the story, which is what i look for in fanfics. Balancing the lewdness with a good story, which you have accomplished in spades.
Well done mate i'm waiting on the next chapter.
And please, give her bigger breasts than the other girls. you do not mind ? thank you in advance.
Friendly this suite,
I hope the next girl with naruto will be hinata. It is my favorite.
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Amazing chapter
Problem is, the Minato sex scene was not as good as the Naru/Saku/Ino... and this last one wasn't even an half of a sex scene in the first place !
You want to do what you want to do, it's all to your honor, but damn, if you want to write fapping material, do it, and do it right, without some sort of half-assed 'this is not like that in real like'.
The first chapters were sexy, were awesome, and gave us what we wanted. Now ? Meh. Who care about Issei ? Who care about Minato ?
Just write the smuts with Naruto and the female character, since only his scenes are good
Great chapter, looking forward to more! Can you have Naruto turn Anko into a slave after she insults/assaults him?
id realy love to see a lemon where naruto ruines his sisters.
hope it will be soon
Loving this story a lot though I'm not a fan of naruto sharing it's your story and it's up to you however I do request that popular girls like Rias and Akeno get a nice big long lemon threesome with naruto taking their virginities same with the fairy tail girls and such. Either way keep up the good work
Also will we see any scenes with Issei or is that going to happen off screen?
Soooooo, I've got a few things to say here. If you decide to ignore me I don't blame you but I would like to at least voice myself.
Now, I will admit that my main reason for visiting this site is for fapping material. For that I thank you and the other authors whose works I read. Regarding this fic, I saw it as basically, with all due respect, porn without a serious plot, though I guess that's the same thing as normal porn. However, when Akeno was first mentioned I figured she would eventually fall to Naruto's dick as well as other DxD girls. While I respected whatever choice you make, I had already told myself that I would skip that scene. I kind of have trouble accepting fanfic where Naruto is basically a Harem stealer from characters I like. Issei Hyoudou from Highschool DxD is a prime subject in this matter. He is one of my favorite characters and I enjoy the way his harem comes together in the cannon light novel.
Now, with the release of this latest chapter and you explicitly saying Issei would be like a Lieutenant to Naruto, I have decided to speak up. I will definitely skip over scenes where Naruto is with a girl from DxD. Nothing against you or your writing, just my own personal tastes. However, if you have any scenes with Issei and any girl then I will definitely read it. There are too few lemons featuring him despite his own cannonical character being a pervert desiring a harem.
This brings me to my questions. While I ask about Issei specifically, this can apply to other future Lietenants.
First, will there by any girls with genuine feelings for Issei and not be part of Naruto's booty call list? In my opinion, cannon Asia and Irina from DxD are truly in love with Issei and the thought of Naruto having fun with them makes me uncomfortable. Will that affect your story, or will Naruto not rest until his Incubus powers have affected all women in his sight?
Second, will Rias and Akeno develop genuine affection for Issei, or will they merely tolerate him for the sake of Naruto's cock? I am asking this as a curious writer and reader.
Third, what sort of relationship will Issei and Naruto develop. I mean I understand how formally it will be one of servitude, but will they be true friends?
Fourth, will Issei have access to the Bitches and Slaves in Tier 4 and 5 respectively?
Now that my questions and concerns are out of the way I would like to provide a few suggestions.
HighSchool of the Dead: Shizuka, Saeko, Rika Minami (the dark skinned sniper)
To-Love-Ru: Ryoko Mikado, Tearju, Risa, Azenda (assasin who recently tried to kill Rito through assaisn Black, failed, and then she got groped into orgasm by the god of ero slip up Rito himself)
Bleach: Harribel, Rangiku
That's all I have for now
If you have read all the way through, I am honored and I thank you.
Can you tell us who is in the tiers and will Samui mabui Yugito Rias Akeno his sisters belong to Naruto
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