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Reviews for Sasuke's mate

By : crowfeast1405
  • From Habak on July 21, 2016

    Intense fanfic, its great, thanksi for that pairing!  Do y ou plan on doing a Sasuke X Tsunade? 


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  • From Silber-D-Wolf on July 07, 2016

    great


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  • From Silber-D-Wolf on July 07, 2016

    awesome story


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  • From TheHentaiKnight on July 07, 2016

    Not bad. Your biggest problem definitely is grammar. Fixing the grammar will definitely improve your story a lot, especially in presentation and how it flows. Also, I personally thought it was overly long. The smut is the most important aspect and I felt there was a lot of unnecessary material that could have been removed and probably would have made the story more enjoyable to read.

    Other than that, I can say I look forward to reading your future stories. I've been waiting for more Kushina lemons with characters other than Naruto and MInato and it seems you plan to do just that.


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  • From viscious_aggression_101 on July 07, 2016

    can we be best friends? you're ideas basically match my taste bit by bit


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  • From david15 on July 06, 2016

    Hey have you conseedered posting on hentai-foundry there are a lot of stories like this in in there

    Naruto section heres a link if you wont to cheack it out http://www.hentai-foundry.com/categories/44/Anime-and-Manga/Naruto/stories


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  • From Communist on July 06, 2016

    Your English is horriable and the smut is just everywhere, maybe i should make an another story where the fourth Hokage lived and he dealt with the Uchiha Coup by using his hiraishin no jutsu to solo all the men, leaving the women to the victor. Anyone want a story like this? Anyways compared to my smut yours is lacking in everyway


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  • From david15 on July 06, 2016

    Hey this was great I cant wait to read what you come up with next expecly the ones with Danzo or

    Madara take over Konoha


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