Reviews for MILF Hinata Vs Perverted StudentBy : Planemo |
hello friend, I hope you're ok, I just read your story and it's very good, no doubt great, it's one of the best I've read, I hope you can upload the next one soon because I'm dying to read the continuation, I'll definitely look forward to read the next chapter luck.
Honestly, I thought this was a pretty great start to the challenge. Definitely part of the better fanfictions i've read since you know how to write proper english. Although I feel like it went a little bit too fast into the whole lemon part, but it might just be me. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter you come up with!
A pretty good fic you have here. I would love seeing Fem.Kyuubi/Kurama getting dominated by Jokuro.
And maybe the other Tailed Beasts too. Then again there is a chance that Jokuro already did it (if you are planning on adding a Tailed Beast or two) to Matatabi, since he did come from Kumo after all.
I am eager to see the next chapter.
I like it. Love how hinata gets screwed like a bitch in heat. Hope to see Mikoto, tsunade, Hana, tsume, Mei, kurenai, and koanon in coming chapters.
Please correct your disclaimer.
Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.
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