Reviews for Kotomatsukami [Kushina's Fuck-Ventures 2]By : BitterNTR |
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WELL I GUESS OROCHIMARU WILL BECOME THE YONDAIME HOKAGE NOW, ALSO, THE NAME KOTOMATSUKAMI COMES FROM SHISUI UCHIHA'S MANGEKYO SHARINGAN, RIGHT? WELL HE DOESN'T EVEN HAVE THAT YET,
I'm just loving where this story's going so far. While the story is slow, that's actually part of the fun, since after all, the best things comes to those who wait.
Can't wait to read more of Kushina's downfall.
Update dude .
One of the best stories that Ive read in a long while!
I hope you don't stop posting this on here.
I'm really enjoying the fic
Nice chapter
Hope you continue
the plot is a little to drawen out for my tast i like it were the jump into sex scense but all in all i will keep an eye for future update keep up good work
I think the slow route is best. It's always instant n no build nowadays. It's refreshing to be honest. Can't wait to c how she handles or "handles" kumo. 😝
As for her owns student? Go girl. We already got enough kushina sensei stuff.
Very good writing cant wait till next chapter
Most stories usually dive into the sex but I like the way you're takin your time with this and how subtle Danzo is being with Kushina.
I wonder why Danzo is allowing information about Kushina to be leaked? She is the Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki so I imagined that he would keep information about her under wraps.
Keep up with the good work!
Don't expect many reviews on this site. Can't speak for all, but for me it's too inconvenient here.
If you want feedback, post this fic on FF.net or AO3.
You could have danzo justify keeping kushina for herself with the logic that one of the best ways to protect the Leaf Village Would be by establishing a monarchical rating of the hokage setting himself and his blood line up as the primary guardians simultaneously adding to his blood lines power by adding te uzumaki body techniques to his lineage While maintaining the 9 tails in his hands and power structure forever. For the question about the student you could pick Simone from chojis clan they have a technique to supersize parts of there anatomy yet it's never retired in pervy ways.
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Awesome story loved this chapter
I like the build up and flow of your story keep it up, I can't wait for your next installation and I like anko, you can part possibly party the party of the she was just betrayed by orochimaru and kushina takes care of her which causes blind devotion and a need to thank kushina for not hating her like the rest of the village
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