Reviews for Kotomatsukami [Kushina's Fuck-Ventures 2]By : BitterNTR |
I wish I was good enough to get that many views ;-;
The story is really good but i just wish it was moving a little faster
I do like your stories and i can't wait for you to update this story and your other story Kushina's Fuck-Ventures 1.Keep up the great work
Agh, so close to the full thing! as the title says, you're teasing us! looking forward to the full course
Hey there again, (this time logged in and not as anon)
I'm glad to see that you are still taking things slowly, as you already said, rushing to the naughty bits can be fun but it doesn't really have a place in multi-chapter stories that at least have a semblance of a plot.
Although I have to admit that I enjoyed the 'teasing' scene. Just to be clear, Kushina's age should be around 12-13? Or did you change it (or am I wrong)?
I also liked Danzou's way of explaining the realities of the shinobi world, and his distaste for 'pampered civilians'. I wonder what he would say to Sakura?
Regarding your Idea for Kushina's possible future genin, I already wrote a small post in your discussion thread but I fell like I need to clarify some tings (and since I'm already here I'll just do it in my review).
I think I misunderstood the point at first, to me it sounded like you wanted Kushina to train a partner, for herself, but I guess I was wrong about that. Personally, I am still favouring a boy student, now however mostly because I have a thing for Kushina sleeping with her younger male students, instead of anything practical.
If you do decide on a female student I would prefer Yuugao or Rin. Yuugao because I think hers and Kushina's skill sets mesh rather well, and Rin because she is a rare character, you barely see any stories with her making more than a guest appearance or a single lemon chapter.
Also, don't worry so much about the lazy readers. Most are probably too busy jacking off to reviews idk... or maybe they just lack common courtesy...
Anyways I hope you won't be busy for too long, as I am really enjoying your story. Hope to see and update soon.
Cheers,
C_Wade
he man great story so far i like the setting with danzo being at the center of it. now is danzo more or less a good guy in this fic or is he all bad. and also maybe for later chapter you could have fem naruto have the same thing happen if you make danzo have kushina marry minato for mor control of the village type of thing. overall greest job and keep them coming
Honestly, I must admit that I never thought to review, simply because I'm accostumed to FF.net where the review bar is immediately accessible once you finish the last sentence, so anything I'd wish to say was still fresh.
I am sorry if this has in anyway brought you to believe that I am not interested in reviewing.
Still, I am hoping to see more of this,
Drake Darkduke.
Awesome story, can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work and will Kushina get raped in this fic?
Thank you for your work
Great chapter (and story)!
I like that you don't just rush to the 'naughty' parts, there are tons of storys like that already, and instead take the time to develope the plot (which is lacking, or even entirely missing, in 90% of the stories on this site) properly.
I wonder though, since kushina was said to have a rather cheery/happy/etc. personality in canon on how it will conflict with the 'darker' aspects of root. Will she be forced to obey because of the command from danzo but hate it, or will she develope a different personality compared to canon?
Hope to see an update soon,
cheers.
Moar please =V
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Your stories aren't bad but guacamole is nasty I ope you update soon
At the plot points you stopped at Rise to hokage, are you going to finish the story after that or are you going to write some of the things from the anime??
One hell of an awesome story mate
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