Fuck Kiba! Fuck that asshole! I hope he fucking dies!

okay to darkdream look sasuke and kiba are bashed yes on normal fanfiction sites and even then naruto is bashed evenly in normal fanfiction along with them but adultfanfiction however everytime you look up the naruto section these days there is either a yaoi naruto harem story or  whore kushina stories pop up like where he gets extremly stupidly bashed (sometimes for no reason at all) and gets cuckolded its rediculous if i had $50 for every gay naruto and whore kushina fic that came out these past five months i'd be filthy rich would never have to worry about a job ever again look i'm not telling lord of lust to stop writing his stories cause that would just be hypocritical of me i'm just saying he can make kiba get what he wants without heavy bashing on other characters i mean he did it for the last six chapters why break the trend?  

Normally I don't think it is OK to use reviews for discussions so sorry in advance LordofLust.

Come on Guys, this is just a fanfiction. You are acting as if your Family was insulted. So what if the author makes Kushina a willingly slut? What is the problem when in this fiction she is not the best kind of mother? We have on this site a lot harder stories where Mikoto or Tsume or anybody else are slutty and of course OOC. In most of these fictions Sasuke (I don't like him^^) and/or Kiba are heavily bashed. Oddly enough only this light netorare scene of Kushina is causing an uproar. I don't see any of you complaining in the other fictions. 

Be as it may, I think the author makes a fantastic job in writting an original fiction and I hope he continues it. You don't have to see it my way and I agree that I was a bit offensive in my previous comment but this is still no reason to be complete jerks in the review section.

Okay so all you kiba and sasuke fan boys woudn't mind if there was a whore mikoto or tsume story with them either tied up to a chair and having naruto and or minato sllaughter their clan then fuck them hard right  oh also their dicks become small and they have as much chakra as your average citizen and lets include the mothers being cruel to the childern by the way e.g pissing on them, forcing the boys to eat second hand cum from their pussies, or how about telling the sons that they don't love them anymore and only belong to naruto-sama or minato-sama  having the mothers just do about the mosst sick disgusting depraved things forcing sasuke and kiba to watch? oh but i'm sure it will be fine for you guys we'll just tell you the same things you keep telling us (it's fanfiction get over it, don't like don't read and here's my favourite one out of all them this is my story and i can do whatever i want with it) you guys won't rage right no of course not if there ever was a naruto netorare with sasuke or kiba being the viictims then there is no reason for you guys to get mad cause well as you so well put it its fanfiction get over it.

Kushina should go with 2 character at once and the chapter is too short 

So. Naruto gets disqualified for using some of the Kyūbi's chakra? Hmm. Neji attempts to kill Hinata and injures her to the point of being hospitalized. Gaara cripples Lee and the only reason Lee doesn't die is because of the sensei's interference.

Right.

Slutty Kushina can exist, but only in one shots. This story proves it. Minato jumping in and disqualifying Naruto for usage of bijū chakra is bullshit, pure and simple. It only exists for the lime with Kiba and for further Kiba-is-an-Adonis amongst men fanfiction, which isn't that great.

Kiba? No. Shikamaru. Neji. Shino. Hell, even Lee's a better choice. Kiba's not a bad character, but like God!Mode Naruto, God!Mode Kiba can burn in hell since it's reliant on all the things most people dislike about fanon Kiba.

It usually doesn't bother me, 'cause hey, everyone has their kinks and all that shit; but even if Naruto's supposed to be 'average' (what a joke; Menma is the child of a more 'average' Minato and Kushina and winds up being something between a genius and a monster), the sudden God!Mode/God!Cock Kiba just comes off as laughable and as a way to bash Minato and Naruto.

If you'd gone for a one shot, I think this story would have been better. But prolonging into a feature length story just gives you more and more time to further fuck things up and remove it from resembling anything regarding professionalism or realistic.

I hate netorare. So much. It's essentially the Naruto Chaos Mage of smut.

I'm loving this! Tho I hope it get a little dirtier... maybe dirtt talk or something like that :/

Keep it up!!

Oh ya one more thing forgot to put in my review screw the haters keep on doing what you're doing. their limp dicks can just screw off. if you don't like it the don't read it. Keep doing what you're doing and don't like these retarded anons get to you. 

LOVE YOUR STORY!!! One of the few stories I read on here. That scene in the infirmary was especially hot and naughty. Love your writing, though I do wish the udpates would be longer. I enjoy how you're talking your time with breaking down Kushina slowly making her chip away at her restrictions and what she is willing/isn't willing to do every time and becoming a slut. Were those kinky fantasies that the boys had in the forest of death foreshadowing of thinks to come? 'Cause if so, that is HOT! Keep them updates coming.  

Okay I just read these unqualified rewies (mostly done by anonym accounts of course). 

Please don't let it drag you down. They define everything as Naruto bashing when he is not an Overpowered godlike beeing with a mass Harem. They just criticise that the story is different then the other 99% on this site. 
In my opinion Naruto was NOT bashed. He was shown as strong, it was just so that Kiba was better. Further I think it was said that Naruto (in this world) was more or less an average Shinobi.  
Some reviews seem to compare the Plot of the story with the actual Manga, really guys? You do know that this is a FANFICTION??? 
Thinking of that, have you really read the manga? Naruto is shown as arrogant and he had quite the harsh conflict with Kiba. Put this fact in context with the background info of this story and it makes perfekt sense! Of course Kiba would like to humiliate naruto by having sex with Kushina in front  of him, it was shown early that this was a fetish of him. This hospital scene was greatly written!

Further you can't say it is bullshit that Minato stopped Naruto, in the Manga he was not there when Gara was letting loose so don't just assume he would do as the third Hokage. Again it is the authors decision, you can disagree with it but do it in the context of this story and not the actual manga. Normally I prefer Naruto centric stories too, but you have to give the author a chance!

@LordOfLust: Sorry, most of this review was for the other reviewers. Critic is fine, I just can't stand it when it is just about the story not beeing like all the others on the site. Please keep up the good work, I would hate to see a creative author with good writting and grammar (which is unfortunately rare by adult fanfcitions) quit because of some Naruto fanboys. 
 

You Sir are a genuis when it comes to write a slutty Kushina story! 
Thank you for staying with Kushinas Team, seeing them pushing her is simply the Best.^^

Again I have to praise you for the well paced teasing space of the fiction, it makes the actual action very special. 

Was it a mistake or intentional that Kiba called Kushina by her first name without sensei? 
Poor Takako, I for myself are fully supporting his fetish. ;-)

Keep up the great work! 

P.S. Please please please update soon! Now that I see that the story hasn't lost it touch I can't wait to see more.

Your story is stupid AF.

you know what i'm going to say already right and just voice what the other's are thinking in the time i've been on adultfanfiction forced to read up on whore kushina stories cause i don't know mayby if there was a whore mikoto story where she acted like a fucking slut and had naruto fuck her infront of sasuke, fugaku and itachi (with there powers sealed and dicks shortened to the size of a twig) there would be world war 3 raging on this site oh and for your naruto bashing technique by the way its so damn retarded in the time i've read naruto bashing porn stories on this site (too many to count) there are two types of bashing there is the smart naruto bashing and what you just displayed in this chater as dumb naruto bashing i mean you didn't even put up a disclaimer at the heading you just wanted some lame excuse to have naruto knocked out so your main booy kiba can fuck his mom over him while gloating typical. 

Bullshit, why would Minato stop and knock out Naruto you dumbass ,Also a naruto with two parents would wreck Kiba. You justed wanted to write a lime between them, scrub

I honestly have to call bullshit on Minato's interference, considering how much Neji and Gaara were allowed to beat down on their opponents in the canon preliminaries, Naruto's disqualification just seems like a stupid ass plot convienence to allow a Kiba-Kushina lemon.