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Reviews for Kushina's pleasure

By : PsykoGhost
  • From Ghostslinger on October 17, 2021

    Really like this story hope you continue


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  • From ANON - on June 30, 2016

     Ino-Shika-Cho trio(both the parents and the children), and even an Uchiha or two
    since she is already going to try pedophila might I ask for wincest?


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2016
    Kushina is show a little restraint and make the sex scene more descriptive... Foreplay show be ling... Description of lust for each other must be longer... Else good start... Hope you update soon
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  • From AFFModerator on April 10, 2016

    Please correct your disclaimer.

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  • From ANON - Autonomous on April 07, 2016
    I wouldn't listen to the ones who put down the story and you. This story has potential and it would be a waste to see it stop. Besides, don't worry about the lack of positive reviews. There is an entire forum of people who would like this. I myself think that this is a nice change of pace. Keep going and don't be disheartened by the negative reviews.
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  • From ANON - I genuinely hate you on April 06, 2016
    I think I understand why people want to commit suicide now. This story was so bad that I'm genuinely suicidal now. How can anyone make something this fucking terrible? Kushina is the only good female character in Naruto and you choose her to turn into a generic whore? If you want to go that out of character then just make an OC. You don't have to tack Kushina's name on it and ruin the story. Putting aside the reprehensibly bad plot, The writing is cringy as all hell. I'm going to be honest, You're better off killing yourself, you would be doing humanity a huge favor. Thanks for ruining my day you cunt muscle. You should've been aborted into a bowl of ramen you dickwad.
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  • From ANON - san on April 06, 2016
    absolutely pathetic...... you can even type out "naughty" words because your too embaressed to spell them correctly..... the idea is good the other writing is decent the 'plot' is ok but you need to actually grow a pair and write balls dick suck tits fuck and every other word you can think of involving sex with the real spelling not "tatty" or sick or sacking..... thats just sad and pathetic so sad that i honestly must admit you sound like your at the oldest 8 years old and an immature 8 year old at that.
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  • From Kenshinryuu on April 06, 2016
    If she's going to be with females and an Uchiha, I would love to see Mikoto have survived the massacre and both of them having sex and going out for a MILFs' night out.
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