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Reviews for Samui's little Adventure into Submission

By : XENOSherman
  • From Xiaomaome101 on May 14, 2017

    .....how sinful 


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  • From ANON - drak on October 12, 2016

    update please


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  • From ANON - ze on September 20, 2016

    would like to see a naruko, kushina , and maybe a ino story like this 


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  • From ANON - Daniel Schmidt on May 24, 2016
    yeah talk about unrealistic she is a Kunochi who most likely has been trained to resist what naruto's doing to her so she wouldn't give in so easily unless there was something else going on
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  • From Naruto-Gremory on May 18, 2016
    cool story
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  • From enifoot on April 17, 2016
    I've always enjoyed bimbofication plots and Samui's a great candidate for it with her natural looks. The fact that she is such an emotionless character makes it all the more satisfying to see her will bent. Personally I prefer slightly lighter BDSM and more public humiliation, but the extent shown in your story didn't turn me off even if it wasn't quite my favorite either. My only complaint is how fast she seems to be adapting. I feel that it should take a little longer unless there is some drug or jutsu being used on her that is speeding up the process.
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  • From finny94 on April 05, 2016
    Not bad.Certainly not bad for you first one.
    Was pleasantly surprised that you replied to a review directly.Not many authors do that.Hope you took something from it.
    To be fair to you, the chapters weren't exactly 'short', they were short for me.It's just a matter of personal preference.While I prefer 5-6K words per chapter, others might like it shorter or longer.You really can't win here.But as long as they're not too short; well-written interesting and hot - you've got yourself a reader/fan.
    Hope you continue writing(something new, of course),because you do have potential.
    Thank you and good luck.
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  • From theimpacientone on April 04, 2016
    It was a good story if a bit short,I look forward to your next one, which I hope it will be soon
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  • From finny94 on April 04, 2016
    Very good for your first chapter.Thebaetting is interesting and grammar is spot on.Only thing I didn't like was that the chapter was too short :) Hope the next one's longer.
    I'll strongly advice you to not break Samui too fast, it'll ruin the story.Unless you plan to make the story short(2-4) chapters.I don't know if you plan to involve other women in any way, but one of your readers(me) will appreciate any kind of involvement of Ino.I know it doesn't really fit the format, but I just wanted to let you know.
    Anyway, thank and good luck in your writing.
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  • From lordamnesia on April 04, 2016
    Well, this is a nice start! Keep up the good work!
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  • From theimpacientone on April 03, 2016
    okay, first of all, i like the start and how this is going, but why make Samui a bimbo? can't you just not stupefy her or something? no offense but bimbos are in real life annoying
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