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Reviews for Genjutsu Gone Right

By : sandman-nobody
  • From Dansama92 on May 07, 2016
    You know I just think it's nice they got sleep and I'm really enjoying the whole story overall right now and can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what's going to happen with Mebuki. Will Naruto persuade her not to hit him, will Sakura protect him, guess I'll have to wait and see
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  • From ANON - wez on May 07, 2016
    question, how do I met this story down and shot it directly in to my vein? love the fic, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2016
    Anko?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2016
    Actually, what I like to read is this kind of story : things not so easy, some fun, some psychology. That or a good big smut ^^. But you told us that it won't be the case, and I can only support you in your choice. I liked the way the thoughts of Sakura changed. And I'm impatient to know how these 2 birds will manage to est the wrath of Merumy.
    On another note : does it mean that Naruto persuasion was on the entire village or solely on him ?
    Will the girls involve in his relationships will know about each others?
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  • From ANON - ju on May 06, 2016
    amazing story want to see what sakuras mom is gonna do with that frying pan haha
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  • From ANON - justafan on May 06, 2016
    amazing chapter and i like my porn with plot at least when its this amazing and for the womem who are already in a relationship like sakuras mom can you do it like from the secret technique where naruto just steals them from there husband and stuff and i would also greatly enjoy if they get pregnant down the line to it makes it go full circle for me and naruto always wanted a family and glad kurenai is on the list asuma doesnt deserve that seriously anyway love your story and cant wait for more haha.
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  • From ANON - Mysticsea on May 05, 2016
    Well written. I liked it alot and hope you keep writing....and maybe adding a time jump too...
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  • From ANON - Rune on May 05, 2016
    Hey man you story is awesome just go with what you prefer its the best story on this site so far. Keep it up
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  • From IceTop on May 04, 2016
    Would love to see you add girls from other villages they can be visiting. Would really like to see Samui, Mabui, Kurotsuchi, Mei Terumi and Koyuki included.
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  • From ANON - Chrono on May 04, 2016
    Well I wouldn't mind Seeing a female Haku or Naruto use his powers to get Sasuke turned into a girl would be entertaining if you're interested. Other then that it depends on if you plan to keep this in Kohoha or be able to bring in girls from other countries.
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  • From ANON - John madden on May 04, 2016
    I've read a lot of stories over the years but this is easily one of the better ones out there. What ever you do please keep going.
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  • From ANON - TheLastMuffin on May 04, 2016
    Fucking fantastic job on this chapter! You could done this in many typical ways that I've seen other writers do in this situation with Naruto manipulating Sakura's emotions, most seem to want to break and abuse her and I feel like it's just a cop out to downplay and hate on that girl. I'm and avid NaruHina fan but I wholeheartedly support NaruSaku when it's done right. Exposing her emotional frailty and dependency for approval from others gave Naruto a chance to make her see she could have all the love, support, reassurance she craves for and more with him since we all know how much he worshiped Sakura Pre-Shippuuden. This is good stuff right here man, I'm honestly on my seat waiting to see how you work Mebuki and Hinata in on this, more power to you fam!
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on May 04, 2016
    But really, if all chapters are gonna be this good, you simply have to write Naru/Ino scenes! And sooner is better. The only other smut fic with Ino that have such quality is 'X-Ranked Missions' by Serious Sam. Too bag author got distracted with his other AU fic..
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  • From ANON - zeek17 on May 04, 2016
    Dammit, who the hell writes smut chapters this long?? With all distractions (fap-fap-fap) it takes ages to read it!
    Jokes (or not..) aside, Naruto in first half of chapter came out quite disguising. I can understand wanting reveng or simply taking advantage of obedient girls, but thinking that forcing himself on someone is fine just because he loves them is simply wrong. I think I've seen that line of thoughts once or twice coming from mouth of fat-ass otaku in doujins. Speaking of, have you read Ninja Independence vol.7?
    Sakura is, on other hand, in second part quite sweetheart.
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    You said you've done your research. So, how does fit in Hinata's mother, who is long dead?
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    All that aside, your work is superb. I had not seen such quality in some time. While some of my favorite fics still update frequently, they don't have this attention to details you have.
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  • From JihlVN on May 04, 2016
    man, those detail was insane. the pacing, the narrating, your way of describing is awesome. you are just like "The Lemon Sage"
    praise aside, do you plan to add Mei Terumi and Konan in Naruto target in the future ? Mei is every boy dream of mature woman and Konan has that elder sister charm.
    And finally what is your update schedule 2 weeks ? 1 month ?
    Again you are fu*king awesome
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