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Reviews for Of Love and Betrayal

By : IvySaurDobe
  • From pssnangel4 on April 09, 2016
    This story is so amazing. Every emotion is so vivid an real. What I love about your story is your understanding of those emotions. Sometimes I'll read a good story, but then the writer will just skim or even skip such intense important emotions that are key for the story. Rushing pass them to move the story along. But the emotions are what make the story great.
    I'm a big SasuNaru fan and I can't wait to read more of them in your story, but the emotional process of losing the one you love, is what sets the stage for this story. For Sasuke and Naruto's future relationship, the pain, the drinking to forget, the random one night stands, it's all important to the story. It keeps me invested, it makes me feel for Naruto, it also makes me crave for answers, much like he does.
    I loved your recent chapter the most, but the ending was by far my favorite part. For obvious reason of course, but also cause of their small shared moment at the end. For Naruto this was nothing more then a one night stand, a quick fuck to release tension and for a small moment forget everything. I'm really glad that you kept it that way all the way to the end. Naruto got what he wanted, grabbed his close and walked away. For him it is done and over with, cause his emotional baggage wont allow for much else at the moment. He's not a cold person, but when your brokenhearted, your unable to care as much as you usually would.
    But Sasuke is another story altogether. He's going threw family issues, which leave his heart wide open for relationships. Granted he's a more closed off person, almost cold hearted to people. But that doesn't mean he can't fall in love as well. His moment with Naruto felt a little different at the end. Now this might be my imagination on this part and if it is, well fair enough. But I felt, when they finished & Sasuke put his arms around Naruto's head and looked into his eyes, even took the time to admire Naruto's face, the face he made sure looked at him while they had sex. It just suddenly felt like it meant more. This was a moment of peace for Sasuke, a breathless moment, a timeless Kodak moment. It felt, for a moment that Sasuke felt something for his one night stand. Perhaps it was a breathless moment he can't live without? An to be honest, I hope I'm not wrong.
    Sasuke is the type of guy that gets what he wants, but with everything Naruto is dealing with, it wont be easy. He's just trying to fill a void with pointless moments. An it would be interesting to see this all comes together. There are so many possibility's of what can happen next. Perhaps Naruto will search for another once night stand, perhaps Sasuke will interrupt? Will Naruto push him away, it was suppose to be nothing more then a one night stand. Or perhaps Naruto will find out who Sasuke is, and try everything to avoid him. Who knows.
    I am curious about Hinata & Sakura though. What will Hinata do? Will Sakura explain things to Naruto? An is she really over Naruto? (Shrug) I have no idea, but I sure as hell can't wait to find out and read more. =]
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  • From pssnangel4 on February 21, 2016
    At first I thought Sasuke was the reason for the sudden change and disappearance of Hinata, but now I'm not so sure. It seems as if Sasuke and Naruto haven't even really met yet. They don't seem to know one another at all, if the last chapter was anything to go by.
    An What are they hiding from poor Naruto. They have no right to decide what you should or shouldn't know, it's his life. The truth can hurt, but so can keeping it from them. To heal an truly move on you have to know everything, you have to hurt, get angry let everything out. It is when you finally let all your feelings out that you can finally let go and try to understand everything that happened. Then and only then, can you except it and honestly move on. But they are lieing to poor Naruto, keeping the truth from him, keeping him trapped in his own pain under the false thoughts of protecting him.
    So much needs to be explained. =] Either way I'm liking the story so far. I keep checking to see if you've updated your story, but sadly you haven't yet. =] I can't wait to read more.
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