Reviews for Stranger than the WildBy : kiddattwell |
This is so well written, that I would love it even if I did not love the plot idea. The only thing I felt was how repetitive the coddling conversations of " I will take care of you were" but otherwise this was the perfect combination of humorous, emotional, angsty and sexy. Although I felt like the sexy bits were few and far in between, but that is probably because you write those bits so well, it makes my heart flutter. Please update, I will be waiting for new chapters. And thank you for creating this beautiful piece
So, I picked this one up after having missed a few chapters...
I’m really enjoying this story. It’s been a little slow ramping up, but the effort you’ve put in to developing the relationships is excellent writing. It’s a fascinating take on what happens to team 7 when they are honest about their feelings for each other.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
This is really good!
Definitely enjoying this one. Good use of foreshadowing 😊
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