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Reviews for Naruto Shippuden: Naruto's Hypnotic Slave Girls

By : LiquidPhazon
  • From Osroll on January 02, 2020

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  • From Gamesofdark on May 21, 2017

    this fic is so much fun :)


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  • From Zeroth on April 28, 2017

    More dude make more


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  • From ANON - narutolemonislife on March 07, 2016
    Wow I loved this fanfic it is better than any fanfic lemon Ie ever read thank you or making this......but when naruto said "Are you ready for another wild night?" That was not such a cliffhanger but i wish the story never ended never ever i wanted it to go on forever until naruto captures every female ninja in 'Naruto' this includes the ones in Akatsuki and for it to go on until it gets boring 'also make it very kinky'
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  • From IceTop on December 26, 2015
    Very hot story hope to see Koyuki, Kurotsuchi and Mabui.
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  • From robert77833 on December 25, 2015
    Kushina chapter please!
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  • From ANON - TheJusticeFriends on December 23, 2015
    By more detail I mean don't just repeat over and over every time he has sexy time with one of the girls that it went on for an hour, the girls came 4 times (which you've used most of the time) and then Naruto blows and then next scene. Slow it down, flesh out some dialogue, description of emotion or feelings more, and describe the lemons better than he thrusts in, they come, he comes, Salura does this or Ino does that. Describe what's going on, whether the setting, the surroundings, or the pace and position, etc.
    you're doing fantastic, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - TheJusticeFriends on December 22, 2015
    This is a pretty darn good story! And also your updates are impeccable! So quick! The only thing I would ask you to do would go into more detail with the lemons. Describe more from both sides of the action. Most of it is just cookie cutter from the previous ones with some interesting and unique dialogue from each girl. While I like the story and the update time, it needs more detail.
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  • From ANON - Hellhound on December 21, 2015
    How about Samui, Sasame, Yugao, Guren, Fuka, Pakura, Shizuka, Tsume, Hana, or Anko?
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  • From ANON - robert on December 20, 2015
    Is there going to be more chapters? maybe make this a story? if so cant wait to see what is next
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