Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
I agree with you. Ino is probably the hottest Naruto girl. And she just seems like she would be fun. Hinata is too soft, Sakura is too hard, Temari is too fierce, Ino is the right balance of them all.
That and blonde. Gotta love blonde.
And additionally. When I mentioned longer chapters I kind of meant that you should probably tie in some more plot with them. I mean the fact that you got this much plot in this fic is important. So I can only imagine how it would turn out if you stretched your legs a bit more.
Also once again I would advise you to relocate to Hentai Foundry. The community is a lot more active and you might even get to write some commisions.
Fantastic chapter once again. The slow downfall of Ino was absolutely wonderful to watch. It does feel nice to be able to see the complete process with at least one girl. Gives an idea of how he went ahead with the others. Only thing left is to know where she ranks on the harem totem pole. Close to the top with Hinata and Tsunade? Or somewhere near the bottom with Sakura and the Inuzaka women?
Regardless I am looking forward to the future of this fic. Samui and Kurenai all sound like promising additions. The downfall of Tsunade is still out there. And Sakura sequels could be a more emotional driven take on the Onsen chapters. Lots of material regardless.
BRO hooooooooooly fuck this was insanely hot. You finally delivered on my more pregnancy request and there’s only one better girl than Ino to do it. So fantastic choice and what a fucking great chapter.
Even though there was no smut, I still really enjoyed it! It would be great to see more development of naruto outside of his sex life, like dealing with politics etc. Just not too much that it distracts us from what we are really reading!
Another amazing chapter, thank you for your hard work!
It would honestly suck if you ended up abandoning this story since you're pretty much the only reason I even visit this site. I've really been enjoying this story but I will respect your decision if you do end up. In my opinion I think you should just update once in a while to keep you from getting burnt out. You don't have to update once a week or every other week as it probably gets tiring. Just take your time and give yourself some time to breathe. Other than that its ultimately up to you m8. Great chapter as always by the way.
I've been enjoying the story quite a bit, and I hope you continue.
Any chance of a Tsunade 3 chapter? Because a) Naruto being 13 when she starts in on him is creepy (although I get that Konoha would probably have a much lower age of consent, and Naruto is hardly a child by this point in the story) and b) I'd like to get to the part where Tsunade gets preggers.
Which I hope happens when Naruto is substantially older than 13.
That said, Tsunade is more than old enough to be menopausal. Are we operating under the assumption that kunoichi have longer reproductive periods than normal women, or is she just somehow staving it off with her medical knowledge?
Even though there was no smut, I still really enjoyed it! It would be great to see more development of naruto outside of his sex life, like dealing with politics etc. Just not too much that it distracts us from what we are really reading!
Another amazing chapter, thank you for your hard work!
Im goint to say that you probably have more people reading this than you think, like me for example, before i didnt leave any reviews, because i was lazy, but this story is so well written that i have to start writtinf reviews
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I think if u mix a lil more polt in this story will be great I hope you don't end this but if you do please keep doing alpha male naruto stuff there not alot on here
Well first, good chapter.
Second, I hope you follow the story, even if you start another one. I mean, what I want to say is that if you want to continue this story in the future you can do it, because it's great.
As for the comments or replies left, I think it is due to several factors. That they go from that this site little by little loses relevance, happening because the sleeve Naruto already finished. Until it ends it is not a well-known place.
I do not know if you know the fic Eroninja of TheLemonSage, it's one of the best stories, with many chapters, excellent plot and a harem to die for. However, it has few comments and replies and is not very well known.
I would recommend AO3 on all other places. Because with the tags that you can give to this story, it would be impossible not to see it, hahaha.
And to finish, what is preferable ?.
A dictura that deals with the people and their basic needs, promoting work, health and education in addition to free expression or a democratic government sells homeland that only serves the interest of a few and enjoys the suffering of others, censures dissident voices and makes political, judicial and mediatic persecution to anyone who is an opponent.
I'm telling you because I'm from Argentina, and that's exactly what's happening.
Do not be discouraged and keep going.
Luck
I'm honestly surprised those two old farts are still alive. And Naruto has the backing of two clans heads, so yeah, he is pretty powerful politically.
I hope Kiba finds a girl who makes him happy... and isn't interested in Naruto.
And to be fair to Kiba, the Fourth Shinobi War could have concluded with everyone being turned into eternal slumber batteries for Kaguya, so it was short but terrifying.
I only created this account to review this fic. I wanted to review this because it is one of if not the best lemon stories I've ever read and I'm really hoping you dont abandon it just because you dont get many reviews.
I would agree that it has stretched on too long. I think that it would be better if you killed the last chapter and finished the story with all of the women getting knocked up. The last chapter introduces a hint of plot to the story that is uneeded as 1) this is porn, not porn with plot and 2) you can't add a plot 16 chapters into a story and do it well.
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