I've been enjoying the story quite a bit, and I hope you continue.

Any chance of a Tsunade 3 chapter? Because a) Naruto being 13 when she starts in on him is creepy (although I get that Konoha would probably have a much lower age of consent, and Naruto is hardly a child by this point in the story) and b) I'd like to get to the part where Tsunade gets preggers.

Which I hope happens when Naruto is substantially older than 13.

That said, Tsunade is more than old enough to be menopausal. Are we operating under the assumption that kunoichi have longer reproductive periods than normal women, or is she just somehow staving it off with her medical knowledge?

Even though there was no smut, I still really enjoyed it! It would be great to see more development of naruto outside of his sex life, like dealing with politics etc. Just not too much that it distracts us from what we are really reading!

Another amazing chapter, thank you for your hard work!

Im goint to say that you probably have more people reading this than you think, like me for example, before i didnt leave any reviews, because i was lazy, but this story is so well written that i have to start writtinf reviews

Add ntr mikoto 

I think if u mix a lil more polt in this story will be great I hope you don't end this but if you do please keep doing alpha male naruto stuff there not alot on here 

Well first, good chapter.

Second, I hope you follow the story, even if you start another one. I mean, what I want to say is that if you want to continue this story in the future you can do it, because it's great.

As for the comments or replies left, I think it is due to several factors. That they go from that this site little by little loses relevance, happening because the sleeve Naruto already finished. Until it ends it is not a well-known place.
I do not know if you know the fic Eroninja of TheLemonSage, it's one of the best stories, with many chapters, excellent plot and a harem to die for. However, it has few comments and replies and is not very well known.

I would recommend AO3 on all other places. Because with the tags that you can give to this story, it would be impossible not to see it, hahaha.

And to finish, what is preferable ?.
A dictura that deals with the people and their basic needs, promoting work, health and education in addition to free expression or a democratic government sells homeland that only serves the interest of a few and enjoys the suffering of others, censures dissident voices and makes political, judicial and mediatic persecution to anyone who is an opponent.
I'm telling you because I'm from Argentina, and that's exactly what's happening.

Do not be discouraged and keep going.

Luck

I'm honestly surprised those two old farts are still alive. And Naruto has the backing of two clans heads, so yeah, he is pretty powerful politically.

I hope Kiba finds a girl who makes him happy... and isn't interested in Naruto.

And to be fair to Kiba, the Fourth Shinobi War could have concluded with everyone being turned into eternal slumber batteries for Kaguya, so it was short but terrifying.

I only created this account to review this fic. I wanted to review this because it is one of if not the best lemon stories I've ever read and I'm really hoping you dont abandon it just because you dont get many reviews.

I would agree that it has stretched on too long. I think that it would be better if you killed the last chapter and finished the story with all of the women getting knocked up. The last chapter introduces a hint of plot to the story that is uneeded as 1) this is porn, not porn with plot and 2) you can't add a plot 16 chapters into a story and do it well.

Shit. Yeah, I can't say that I blame you for losing interest in writing this. Granted, we readers sure as hell aren't, but I can imagine that it has gotten a bit stale for you at this point. I'm not sure what your word count is up to at this point, but I'm sure it's currently sitting at 100k words. That's a lot for a smut fic, albeit possibly the best I've ever read. 

I do hope that you continue this, even if you have to include more chapters such as these to rekindle your interest. If not, I hope to see a couple of loose ends tied up before you possibly stop. Like Tsunade and Kushina in particular, even if it's merely one more chapter each. The Tsunade plot line was really intruiging, since she essentially sent him on this path. And I've already expressed my interest in the Kushina plotline, so I won't get into that again. 

But this was an interesting look into how others percieve this situation. Although the idea that Naruto is becoming a dictator is a bit of a stretch. Whilst he has been selfish to some extent in this, it has never been at the cost of Konoha as a whole. The closest he came to such a thing was during the Hyuga and Inuzuka chapters, but even then it was really more for the good of Konoha and it's citizens than any self interest. And it's clearly been stated that Shinobi prefer civilian women anyway, rather than Kunoichi. So they really shouldn't be as salty about the situation as they apparently are. Especially since he hasn't even cucked anyone aside from Sasuke, who made the stakes for their wager to begin with. As far as we know anyway. 

On another note, I found your LOZ stories. Damn, I had no idea that you wrote those as well. I'd love to see Hero Breeding Tales possibly be continued in the future. It's probably one of the better LOZ fics on here. 

Anyway, thanks for the update on how you're feeling about this story man. 

Sorry about the first wall of text I sent up I got pretty excited and rambled one thing I just wanted to point out as an error would be that it's not the 3rd great shinobi war it was the 4th the 3rd would be the one that Tsumes generation fought in with the Sandaime leading  the village. I Can honestly say I don't enjoy this sight much but your story is here and its one of a few reasons I personally even search here and while I do enjoy this story I would not be adverse to you starting another though I'd prefer this were wrapped up or kept on the side with an update now and again though that's ultimately up to you as the author. I do understand that a new story prompts a reinvigorated hype as its new it'll garner more reviews because there is less to go back and reread and you don't know where the story will head which leads to us the readers drawing conclusions and hyping the next chapter so we can read and learn more of the story and the world you create and shape in it. Oh shit sorry for this new wall of text.

I love the smut of this story ever since I first discovered it but I loved chapter 26 so much I like the inclusion of what the rest of the world or atleast those who hold power and influence in Fire Country are beginning to perceive Narutos accumulation of power with the women he's collected through the words of Koharu and Homura.

I've always been a big fan of Military dictators and Paternal Autocratic governments in fiction and history as I find them to be rather fascinating in their goals, beliefs, and therefore how they justify their actions. Despite this being smut I saw Naruto as essentially a commander accumulating a great deal of power, popularity, and influence through his actions whether intentional or not he is becoming a figure that can influence the nation at large and possibly other countries should he which it. Whether or not he wishes to admit it his actions have been rather autocratic though he's more of a Paternal Autocrat wishing only for what he perceives  as the best for his people he's the father of the people protecting them from both those who would endanger them from the outside and from their own actions.

 I like the realisation and self questioning of whether  or not he is a dictator at the end which he is a dictator in a long line of dictators for Konoha but it's his actions which define whether he is a benevolent dictator for his people benefit or simply a lustful megalomaniac bent on his own self pleasure no matter the cost. I think he's the former personally he has been somewhat selfish but he's never done something that he believes will harm the village and the people he's been dutifully loyal in his goals for his home it's just a matter of whether  or not his power will corrupt him in the end.

Something I'd like to point at though for Naruto is his "crossing the Rubicon" moment is over he's past the point of backing down he can't back track at this point he can't even resign or retire early cause it'll cause upheaval in the rank and file. At this point for his opposition whether they want to admit it or not better to have him in power than risk a military revolt which could lead to a coup or perhaps a civil war that even Naruto can't fully control or consent against.

I certainly hope you do continue this story, though I can understand gradually losing interest. This is easily one of the best five I’ve seen on this site, and this chapter was no exception. I was absorbed in the storytelling going on and how a world like the kind you’ve set up in the lemons works. Especially with that last bit about Naruto’s strength and the repercussions of it. 

While I will still read any fics you put out on here, I do hope you end up sticking with this one, even if it’s only a chapter every few weeks or so. I feel there’s still a lot of potential for both plot and lemons left to be had, and I look forward to seeing where it hopefully goes from here. 

hey sorry i havent reviewed in a while i just got caught up i would like to thank you for continuing your story it is by far my favorite lemon work i have read i hope you keep writing but dont feel pressured to only work on this you are very talented if you have another project to work on go ahead just come back to this when you have some inspiration

Lotta walls of text in this. Also, I think you repeated some lines a little bit.