Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
Fun change-up with how this chapter was written compared to the others. I’m enjoying the buildup on this set of chapters, the payoff should be very fun to see. Getting her mostly uninterrupted thought process is a great way to show Naruto’s slow effect on the women in his life
Always glad to see you update this fic, it’s my favorite that’s on the site right now.
found this gem in ff and i can't believe there are 30 chapters here....hope there are more tsunade here thou
Very, very good chapter.
Kurenai's point of view, this is great.
Sorry for the delay.
Keep it up.
I've created an account purely to be able to review this fic and say that its the best adult fic I've ever written. The sec scenes are really well written and the backstory and emotional connections of the characters are woven in well.
I really like the whole internal struggle Sakura is going through with loving Naruto but not feeling worthy of telling him. Makes me wonder what happened for Sarada to be born and how she felt about having a child for someone other then Naruto. The same os true for Ino as well I suppose but her emotional connection to Naruto is less deeply developed at the moment.
I look forward to reading more whenever you can post abd reguarly check to see if theres an update. So thank you for writilng this amazing fic
Also, how exactly is Kurenai going to raise Mirai? Will she raise her normally until she's eighteen and introduces her to Naruto or will she train her to worship him from birth?
More impregnation! More Tsume! More Hyuuga! Please...
I was away from this story for a couple of months but I must say, returning back to the story was a good decision. I totally agree with you on the Ino arugument, she is one of my own fantasies as well and I gotta admit SHE IS DAMN HOT! I once suggested Temari, u can use the laziness of shika and make Temari approach naruto not the other way around.
You were also asking for a way to revive the MILFs without edo tendsei, I may have a solution for that.
Try giving naruto a fuinjutsu which allows him to summon shinigami without the sacrifice, he'll make some sort of deal with the shinigami and BOOM the MILFs are here!!!
So, if Naruto is attracted to redheads, does that mean Karin will be given a chapter or few in the future, if only to have some IRL incest? I badly want to see her in this story, just to see how you characterize her since she isn't really attracted to Sasuke that much after the whole Danzo hostage 2 for 1 'deal', and when she felt Naruto's chakra shortly after he and Team 7 saved her, she was pleased by his chakra from how warm it was compared to Sasuke's, and desired to feel it again.
Loving those lipstick marks! Also, how's the TFF Discord been going?
Yay! A new chapter! With my favorite , Kushina. Thanks for the chapter. I look forwards to more.
great chapter, still waiting for tsunade 3 though
Yes, I love Mito, so glad you added her to this chapter. And this build up is amazing with Kushina, you are masterful at depravity my friend
Not the direction I was expecting when you said this was another Kushina chapter, but it was definitely interesting.
Im actually glad you decided to go more than just oneshots for the girls. Kinda limits the amount of chapters you can do like that, after all. And I’ve really been enjoying the overall story along with all the smut. You do well in making the world seem believable for what it is, and I really appreciate that.
Its too bad the female Jinchuuriki died, I would have loved to see what you pulled off with adding the whole demon beast aspect.
Hey I bet your busy and u probably get alot of suggestions about chapters but I don't know if u seen any of boruto but re reading the hyuga part 1and2 made me think of an idea. In boruto they made hanabi a sensei of a all female team u should have her train them to please naruto and all three r friends of sarada so u can bring her in as well it's just something to think of for a possible future
I can appreciate the whole alpha-male dominance thing going on in the Kurenai chapter, but it does come off just a little... rednecky. Like, if we didn't have a scope into Kurenai's head that she actually enjoys being treated that way, Naruto would come off like a wife beater.
"TUNA CASSEROLE? AGAIN!?" *slap*
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