Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
I've always wondered why there isn't any fics where Shippuden Naruto time travels into the future in Boruto's age. Just imagine him with all of the milfs from his age. Like milf Sakura and Sarada or milf Hinata with Himawari or some shit. Anyways keep up the good shit and good luck my friend
knowing that you enjoy reading more than writing is starnge since your good at it
if i had to throw some idea (most of them will probably be tsunade lol) :
-maybe continue with the tsunade training series before he went with jiraya : the plot probably be around tsunade witnessing the look on naruto face when sakura hugged sasuke afetr he woke up....she comfort him and hold him.....that can uild a more sturdy strong bond between them where it show how much tsunade genuinly love the kid even without thinking about their promise and potentiel etc...
- another suggestion is how tsunade feel about naruto going for 3 years since she promised to be there for him to train him....maybe she get a bit possesive and naruto remind her that this is all so he can fulffil their promise
-my last non-tsunade idea is about hinata......and how she felt when she heard about sakura ake confession.....that can open a yandere route since you want to include it somehow....maybe have naruto stop her from doing some crazy stuff to sakura with his own methode
i hope those will help
you're really something else
thelemonsage better watch out your smut is out of this world
giving hinata inverted nips and a tatoo in her womb is a stroke of perverted genuis lol....that's canon to me now
so in this timeline naruto already claimed tsunade huh......the dreams are kinda confusing lol
fantastic chapter, i want kurenai 3 asap lol
tbh i didn't really like kuranai chapters....and i thought you didn't really build up a real bond between them for her to break this easily...she barely know him after all and build up has been your strongest point......the best example of build up i can mention is tsunade arc
i was happy when i found there are 30 chapters here.....and a bit sad that there's only 2 tsunade chapters but as i mentined you're doing a great job with their build up...i apperciate not doing a timeskip after tsunade 1 straight to sex and showing her training and fawning over naruto......not to mention your hints about the club arc make me pumped up to see what you're planning for it
have a nice day
i really wish this story keep going and going....as you said there's not enough good smut naruto fics
i feel like you took the bar idea from a certain image drawn by a certain hentai artist lol
Fun change-up with how this chapter was written compared to the others. I’m enjoying the buildup on this set of chapters, the payoff should be very fun to see. Getting her mostly uninterrupted thought process is a great way to show Naruto’s slow effect on the women in his life
Always glad to see you update this fic, it’s my favorite that’s on the site right now.
found this gem in ff and i can't believe there are 30 chapters here....hope there are more tsunade here thou
Very, very good chapter.
Kurenai's point of view, this is great.
Sorry for the delay.
Keep it up.
I've created an account purely to be able to review this fic and say that its the best adult fic I've ever written. The sec scenes are really well written and the backstory and emotional connections of the characters are woven in well.
I really like the whole internal struggle Sakura is going through with loving Naruto but not feeling worthy of telling him. Makes me wonder what happened for Sarada to be born and how she felt about having a child for someone other then Naruto. The same os true for Ino as well I suppose but her emotional connection to Naruto is less deeply developed at the moment.
I look forward to reading more whenever you can post abd reguarly check to see if theres an update. So thank you for writilng this amazing fic
Also, how exactly is Kurenai going to raise Mirai? Will she raise her normally until she's eighteen and introduces her to Naruto or will she train her to worship him from birth?
More impregnation! More Tsume! More Hyuuga! Please...
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