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Reviews for Kage Sexbomb

By : SniperJoe
  • From ANON - vega1447 on December 02, 2015
    whoa! I mean wow. hahaha.... that was just a lot of fun to read. On this site there are so many stories of naruto either getting cheated on, or just being hated that his wife cheats on him that this was actually really refreshing! I mean, I can actually see the rivalry between Naruto and Sasuke (especially with their last fight), them betting something once Kakashi retires. While (with what we know of your world) Naruto wouldn't risk his wife (and canon world) even if he is busy he loves them, Sasuke is never even in the damn village and his daughter at 13 didn't even know if he knew she was born. (yes Naruto while flawed is the better dad). I can see Sasuke betting something like his wife for the seat of Hokage while Naruto would cherish his new wife to much to risk her and therefore not bet such a thing. His winning or losing aren't as important as the bet itself or the circumstances of the bet. Sasuke showed what he would risk for power and Naruto chose family first. (this is why this is a good story.

    the "lemon" that followed. well, I am a guy, I don't know the pleasures that a woman feels during sex. If Naruto was a better lover (insert super P.C. demands), that is great. It seems that Sakura still loves Sasuke after what happens, and Sarada will be born and loved by her family. Yes Naruto is a better lover but I liked the fact that the physical enjoyment didn't in the end sway Sakura, (while the vengeful" part of me like her realizing what she had lost"). The lemon was well written and didn't make Sasuke a (monster like another auther does for Naruto). Yes Naruto was better at sex but Sakura still stayed with Sasuke. No one was a piece of shit in your story, which is why it is fun to read. please write a new chapter soon! you are one of the few that actually let naru/hina be canon without fucking it up, but create an interesting world. can't wait to see where you go with it. (maybe in the future some bolt/sarada...it might be cute. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - vega1447 on December 02, 2015
    Nice, it is about time that there was a story where Naruto isn't the bad guy. I like the idea that if Hinata is fine with it (seem's she is turned on by the idea). that Naruto rewards his kunoichi with sex if they want. (the fact that a married woman like Ino is offered but Naruto just goes "ok, your married that is cool" and moves on makes the action less awkward and just standard practice. Hinata getting into it is kind of hot. Naruto seems to not care about that act itself and seems loyal to Hinata in his heart since he doesn't care about what happens to his body. It cements their relationship while creating an interesting world for the couple to explore, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2015
    Thanks for the quick update! Considering it seems to be in the future, do you plan on having the next generation around? Since Sakura is married to Sasuke, having Sarada around and having her follow on her mother's footsteps might be an idea. Hah!
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  • From ANON - arialore on December 01, 2015
    thank you. There is an author on this site who seems to write stories for the sole reason of making Naruto a terrible person and his wife "Hinata" and daughter run off just to be f$#@ by others. While you are doing the opposite in some sense, you at least gave a reason to. Anko, chose her actions as a reward, Sasuke bet his own wife "while out of character gives a reason". "unlike the un-named author I mentioned you atleast dont' go (insert sakura for hinata in following comment) " (hintata) I really hate you sasuke for all you've done to my husband. (sasuke) bend over bitch you are now mine. (Hinata) Oh god you are the lord of sex..... at least in your recent chapter you gave a damn reason, sasuke was dumb enough to bet his wife... what asshole mother fucker bets something like that. after the first chapter (where I can understand the world) I can see Naruto taking some pleasure in the one woman that he chased for so long, and letting her know that what he did was a one time event because of her husband whether good or bad.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2015
    this chapter is even better than the first.
    could also have sarada find out about naruto and sakura, with her starting to look at naruto as more of a father than sasuke.

    hope you have naruto use a jutsu to cut off sasuke's chakra and make him watch his wife be a slut for naruto.
    maybe break his will and force him to be naruto's butler.
    having to clean up after naruto and sakura.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2015
    This chapter was so good. The descriptions, the inner dialogue between Sakura and her Inner, the superiority of Naruto over Sasuke. You're definitely a great writer. Love the fast updates and just keep em coming. I'm not really demanding these girls but I am hopeful that you will get to write Temari, Samui, Shizune, Karui, Hanabi, Kurenai and her daughter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2015
    you are my new favorite author. you have excellent attention to detail. and the dirty descriptions in ino's mind are amazing.

    also really hope you add sakura. maybe add in sasuke's knowing about it either begrudgingly accepting his wife needs a better man,
    or you could have him become a full cuckold. actively encourage naruto and sakura, and getting turned on at the humiliation.
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  • From ANON - TheJusticeFriend on December 01, 2015
    Yeah! I like this story already, even if delves into kinks I don't like! Keep it up! Sadly my favorite part is how literate and articulate you are when typing. If that tells you the overall quality of stories thus far. Hopefully you can update fairly regularly as well and not drop off like so many others. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Hellhound on December 01, 2015
    Well, this is different. That's a compliment, by the way. Usually it's Naruto who gets cheated on and that's gotten sooooo freaking old. I like that there's at least one story that breaks that well-used mold.
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