Reviews for Kage SexbombBy : SniperJoe |
CH.02 - Sakura 1
Outright starting with Sakura's denial is a masterful play right here.
The whoke smut scene is really developed. It's emotionally charged too, not too much that it's a turn off, but rather more than enough to give that just bit of extra to the lemon.
The descriptions involved and the "trip" she went through are amaing too.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: please post this and your other stories on AO3. The feedback is much better there, both in quality and amount. The review system is better there too, being similar to the Reddit threads.
CH.01 - Anko 1
Powerful beginning for a story supposed smut-driven. You got me excited now.
Woah what an amazing first chapter! Definitely super hot.
The way you described everything is super sexy, not to mention organic and dynamic.
I did not expect for 4 girls to appear in what's essentialy a pilot, but I'm more surprised at the qualty of the content. You got some skills friend.
I have high expectations for the rest of this story.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: please post this and your other stories on AO3. The feedback is much better there, both in quality and amount. The review system is better there too, being similar to the Reddit threads.
This is one of my favorite fan fictions I’ve ever read! It’s such a hot story and I can’t wait for it to continue! Thanks so much for sharing this awesome story you are creating with us!!
possibly one of my favorite stories I've red so far, I would like to see more chapters, more girls, hell i would love to see how a loli would please him, would she give him a naizuri(flat-chested titfuck basically), there's alot you can do with this type of story it's insane
It looks like this story is dead dam it was great and had a great concept
Hey, great story. Just started reading 4-5 days ago, can't stop now.
Please continue writing.
And you mentioned, having another account.
Can you send a link to that.
Thanks and good day.
Love this story man. Don't know when you'll update, that's a you thing and I don't feel like I should make any demands, but I feel like Tenten would be hot. Just a suggestion.
Keep it up! Don't lose faith! Also consider Mei Terumi and more Sarada please!
Please keep updating my friend. The single best Naruto Adult fic i’ve ever read. I’d love to see more Sakura and Kushina. Keep up the great work!
This is so hot. I really hope you keep going. I’d love to see more with Salada and maybe Himawari since you’re exploring incest.
Love this story, best one on this site maybe best one ever. Hoping for more Hinata, maybe MILF-Nata. I personally think you’re crazy for not finding Temari attractive, but hey to each their own. One idea that would be weird but could be good would be Mikoto. It’d be another way of humiliating Sasuke, and maybe he’d actually care unlike with Sakura. Idk how that’d work though. Also the Kushina chapters are the MOST erotic thing I think I’ve ever read. Something about the teasing nature of it is soooo insane. Looking forward to all future updates! Please keep going, this story is one of a kind!
Keep thi a going, please. Best smut ever.
I love this. Keep this up.
I must state again that this is the best smut story I have ever read and eagerly await an update!
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